This was amazing. Can’t wait to read the rest

How the movie SHOULD have gone.

wow I really enjoyed that. great work.

I like it. poor Lisa. I thinnk so far this is my favourite chapter. I really enjoyed Lisa's thoughts especially as well as Jackson's. well done.

I like it. I really enjoyed the different thoughts of Lisa and Jackson. well done.

I like it. Again I really enjoyed the thoughts from both Lisa and Jackson. I like that Lisa felt a bit guilty for hurting Jackson. great work.

I really enjoyed the Lisa/Jackson kissing scene and could easy imagine it playing out in my head. again I really enjoyed the different thoughts that run through their heads. well done.

I like it. I really enjoyed the different Jackson and Lisa thoughts. it's very interesting. well done.

I like the insight into Jackson/Lisa's thought. I like it. great work.

I like the different thoughts of Lisa/Jackson's head. well done.

I love that "Are you stalking me" scene. I like it. and I really enjoy Lisa/Jackson's thoughts. great work.

I like it. I like the playfulness with one another. I like their different POV's. well done.

I like it. I like the different in site on Jackson/Lisa's thoughts. I like that Jackson knows a great deal about Lisa and knows when she is lying. I like Lisa's talk of her grandmother and how embarrassing it is. I like that that Lisa realises she likes him. well done.

This was an incredible version of Red Eye! I absolutely loved it! I was hooked from the beginning. The ending was so sad. I would have really loved for them to find a way to be together, but I suppose it was not there fate. Thank you for the amazing story. :)

Just finished reading this... Fantastic! I'm loving the tension and drama (two of my favourite things!) and you write so beautifully! Heading on over to the sequel... Yay! Who has two thumbs and loves this story? This girl right here!