Good, but kinda dark.

very good work

Gotta ask, curved blade with serrations on the back: Al Mar Warrior? You're so close to finishing this series, come back to it? All that's left is the Xander/Faith/Asmodeus ending with only a few possible outcomes.

well, this was sure different! I'm kinda intrigued now!

This was amazing. Wow. Well written. Great plot. Good ending, if sad. Wow. Don't have any useful comments, sorry, this doesn't need them.

hey,

um well. i dont what to say. how do you usually start to beg someone. dumb question. so i'll just go for the intent that i'm writing you behlaf of... yea

please please please please please.

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sorry i had to check the page if you did write the ending of the story, so i wouldnt be making a fool of myself through the begging. i see that you havent. so again i repeat my cry

please please please please please

finish the story of between the shadows. i know you stopped writting it in '02 and its '06. i've always been the one late to class. it's been an amazing story. i'm not just the fact i love xander and faith together. its the writing style itself. i've love the way you can intricate the past and present, foreshadow the future. return to elements so sacrely mentioned in the beginning. yea it sounds like i'm sucking up but i'm not. i planned on writing you this letter after i read the story. however i didnt think that i would also be writing that i really really really want you to finish writing the story.

but now i think about it, and oh the pain, (chuckles lightly) that its has been 4 years and if you havent finished it since then, than maybe you weren't planning on it. i dunno i hope that not the case. maybe you could direct me to another place that you have your story written in its enitrity. i'm grasping at straws, i know. and yea its a long letter, i know that too

what else can i say. i've been reading this work since 3 days ago. i'd stay in the the morning, like right now is 1:01am (ny time) its works like yours that make me loving reading. the way it formatted, the words, imargery(i mean the imagery... thats discipline and imagination beyond anything i've imagined. i'm in complete awe of it) i'd love to write the way you did in this work. its was a pleasure. so i'm asking if i can also have the pleasure in reading the rest of it.

i hope you read this. or whomever does this contacts me and tells me something about whats become of you, your works(i'm sure this is the only).

i'm glad i had the opporunity in finding the site that contained you're work, even if not in its entirety. it was my esttem pleasure(really it was a pleasure. excasty , laughable, in my seat fall gosh those are lame imageries, because it just more than those glib and overuse picturres.) reading this continually made me stop and imagine what possiblites could happen , could have happened. oh and i havent mentioned this but the fact that you remained true to personalities, yes giving xander a little more extremlity, but reason, was far the best part.

thanks for writing this. i do hope to get a response... one day, hopefully.

please remeber that you're work though may have taken time to get to me and maybe readers like me, your work has infact given me prospect and encouragement at decipling myself at the art of literature. it has made me want, more the ever to strive past the comraditaries of the normalcy of literaute i see today and make somehting more. something remberable as your.

thanks you once again.

~fan of xander and faith

~faith of YOURS(yes, captilization was neccesary lol)

Hey, I don't know if you are still writing this, and I've only read this first Episode, but I wanted to tell you it's great. Yes, I agree on the few typos and grammar mistakes, but they are completely forgotten in the intensity of the story,yes, but even more so, of the writing. Every fight/action scene was perfectly described. And your Xander has this depth, this darkness that is awesome. Personally, I don't mind the lack of detail as to how he came to be this way, I think it's one of the strongest points of the fic, little glimpses that keep us intrigued. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.

EVERYTHING Kahlan Nightwing said. Everything. But just to add my own personal flair, I gotta say... WOO HOO! I loved the fic, and as many are, I'm gonna go read the rest next chance I get! Personally I hate seeing the innocent suffer, but you put in just the right amount of sap to make it almost an alright thing! I'm off! *runs off to read more*

This is going to be a great series. I love the new Xander.

This story is by far, THE BEST XANDER FIC I HAVE EVER SEEN! AWSOME!

God, I can't believe that I've never given any reviews to these earlier fics. I absolutly love Xander and his new Scooby Gang. The scene where Xander comes to the rescue of Annie is amazing. Especally when he took on those agents/demons, I could feel every blow Xander landed.

One of the best fics I've ever read. Written very well and neatly detailed. I loved this.

Very well done and interesting. Xander kicks butt! Keep up the great work. I'm off to read the rest of this terrific series.

I liked the story but am I missing some story before this one, will it be explained later or is it based on the last chapters of Buffy or something like that which I havn't seen?

Hardcore. Epic. I'm scared of Xander in this story, his compasity for violence is...impressive.