| Reviews for Return to Noonvale |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2012 Well? Are you going to finish it? |
 Darktiger09 chapter 2 . 10/8/2010 Finally, a Martin the Warrior Fanfiction! Well done on these first two chapters, I look forward to more. |
| kool girl chapter 2 . 9/7/2008 that was so good! write another chapter! please! pretty please with candied chesnuts on top! |
| Aldama chapter 2 . 7/28/2007 Hmm. Interesting. Why doesn't he just tell them when they ask? Please update soon. |
| ackermom chapter 2 . 2/19/2007 Yay, I love it! Keep writing more! |
| Dalia N'Shard chapter 2 . 8/9/2006 s'good I rather like it |
| conte de fee chapter 2 . 7/23/2006 I think you have a great story here. I am dying to read more! |
| 234568 chapter 2 . 7/9/2006 Ooh! Good story! I can't wait until you update, I haven't read Martin the Warrior, but I saw most of the TV series, so I can piece things together. Great story, again, UPDATE SOON! ~Natsushi |
| Izzfrogger chapter 2 . 6/28/2006 cool, this is really good! please write more, my hearts breaking:) |
| someone chapter 2 . 6/15/2006 update or else! |
| kareah chapter 2 . 6/13/2006 YAY! You fixed them! Yay! Thank you! Thank you thank you thank you! THANK YOU! But you still didn't include Trimp and Chugger (since they became part of Gonff's family, shouldn't you have them walking up to Redwall with Gonff, Columbine, and Gonflet? But maybe you need to read more before you include them in... you may need to get to know what their characters are like)... Well, bye bye! See ya! |
| Socialtopia chapter 2 . 6/12/2006 Ok, to those of you who have noticed my grammer mistakes with the characters such as "yeah" and "guys" I've edited the chapters. You should find that the characters sound a bit more like the ones from the real books...thanks for your inputs! I'll make sure to update soon! |
| kareah chapter 2 . 5/31/2006 Hm, it's GOOD, but, I really do think you should finish Legend of Luke before you go on, or at least update slower, or go over-ah what the heck! I saw that you changed the "Rose pedals" to "Rose petals". Thank you for changing that. Oh yeah, where are you in Legend of Luke? There's this hedgehogmaid named Trimp (of course you know about her) and a little squirrel baby named Chugger (have you come across him yet?); the two of them became part of Gonff's family in the end of the book, so you might want to include them in. I suggest you refrain from using words like "Yeah" and "guys", because that's not how they talked in the book. They have english accents, remember? Other than that, great chapter! Landon is pretty cool; I like him. He's okay. See ya! |
| Clouded Horizon chapter 2 . 5/30/2006 Great chapter, I really liked it! You've got the thing with Landon and the others just right, it works really well. I don't normally go for AU fics, but you've carried it off and convinced me! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh yes, and Martin is perfect. :~) |
| yami4eva91 chapter 1 . 5/16/2006 i'll keep this short and sweet. this is a good fic and i think you should update soon |
