Awww I can't believe that's all ur work is so beautifully laid out. My riddick stories don't even measure up to half of urs!

Wow! Love where you are taking this story!

What was I waiting for?! I'm fucking addicted! I can't wait to get to the next chapter. I don't know if you will read this because of how long your stories have been up. But you have helped me so much! I went down a dark path when someone died. I needed a distraction SOMETHING to get my mind straight. And then I found you. You have brought back my smile. Because of you Jack and Riddick. You are a hero even if you don't know it. If I wouldn't have found your work I honestly would not be here to leave this review. I would have ghosted myself. So thank you for saving my life...

Amazing and perfectly written masterpiece. Best realistic timeline of explaining what if Riddick falls for someone and absolutely my favorite with Jack/Kyra. I've read a few and this is by far the most unique and entertaining with the Necromongers. I mean with Riddick just cruising the space eliminating any planet with dictators the cime ultimately leading that unstoppable army to the Underverse to stop them. Pitch Black movie creatures are still the coolest in horror movies and wish they were featured in this book

I loved this fanfic so much it was amazing I hope you contiune to write riddick fanfics in the future even if it has been years :)

i like a bit of sour before my sweet so this is awesome

nice

Cricket71, Thank you so much for posting this. I really enjoyed the ride. Your intimate scenes were very well written, and I like how you wrote Kyra/Jack. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

I really love this story I've read it a couple of times so good!

Wow! Amazing couldn't put it down. I'm impressed your writing is phenomenal
Thank you can't wait to read your other stuff

I loved this chapter. Seeing the softer side of Riddick was a breath of fresh air.

I kind of was like Jack when I was younger. But instead of getting boobs like she did at 13/14 I got mine when I was almost 18. Yup super late bloomer. From from an A size to a 36C in a year. My best friend had moved out of state the year before so when I saw her the next year during summer vacation the first thing she said to me wasn't hi but she said "oh my God! You have boobs!" Then she also went on about how finally I had some fat on my hips and butt (I weighed a hundred pounds in high school). Which got me to mention about how she went from flatchested to 46DD boobs from she was 12. Lol. Good times.

Anyways got off track. Since it sounds like Jack is going through puberty I wonder how she deals with her periods. I know for me I become short tempered and snappy. Like a harpie and a snapping turtle at the same time. Don't mess with me during my first few days and not until my Midol kicks or or else you will get a nasty verbal lashing from me.

Oh look I went off again. Lol. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Discovered your fanfiction a week ago and haven't been able to stop reading since. I know you finished it a while ago but i just wanted to tell you how amazing it really is. I absolutely love riddick and there was only one riddick fanfiction that i truly enjoyed and that told a fantastic story. But now after reading yours i have 2. The way you write riddick is exactly how i see him and given how hot he is and how well you portray him nearly all of your chapters left me in dying need of a cold shower. Anyway i loved your fanfiction and will definitely be checking out your other work! Massive congratulations are in order, well done you!

I love,love,loved this! Oh my god this is one of the best fics I've ever read and I've been reading fanfictions for 13 years now! I love it I can't even get over how wonderful this is! This dynamic is one of my favorites in stories, gathering and making a family that aren't all blood related. I adore it! I would go on but I'm not going to, I'm saving this to favorites and I know I'll read it again.

Also, Vaako and Eron and the SASS! THE FUCKING SASS IS FANTASTIC OH MY GOD!

Funny dialogue. You did a good job keeping them in character. Look forward to next chapter.