I am in awe at how you made me feel Ennis' pain throughout the story. The ending made me tear up just like the original, and that alone speaks volumes about how well you've written this. Looking forward to reading more from you.

HIP HIP HOORAHY

Very good fanfic. At first I was kind of like "oh this won't be that good" but it turned out to be great! Good job. By the way I think it's good you didn't make a sequel to this cause this was perfect the way it was. Keep writing!

oops, this is the story you wrote in the now. i meant to write this morning's comment about your bbm stories here.

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Aww, I wish they had got together. hope&fate xx

Even though I lack the skills to be a writer, I've been around long enough to know okay writing from mind-blowing writing. So don't be surprised that I'm speaking a mantra of thank you's for this story you wrote. It's pretty darn perfect in my opinion. Thank you for how strained their interaction was in the beginning (big testimony of Jack's love, the through good times and bad times thing) because I'm sick of reading blatantly mushy Ennis/Jack, like what they felt for each other would make Ennis a modicum opener and the one with his heart on his sleeve. What you've written on the other hand truly explores what Jack and Ennis would be put through given the circumstance.

Another big thanks goes to how long it took for Ennis to return to Jack. Years. It's something I like to see. How long they've known each other and how well what they feel is preserved, it just feels right.

Once again, thank you.

Your writing just makes me happy. Enough said.

Very, very interesting. Look forward to finishing this. You describe scenes so fluently and vividly, its all so intense and realistic. I wonder why Ennis came to Jack's place, it doesn't see the thing he would do. I'm sure he has a good reason though.

I absolutely loved this story. Except for all the German. It's nice you're getting into the feel of things, them being in Germany and all, but since I (and most readers) basically know no German whatsoever, having so much German in the story is not a good idea. Readers will feel like they are missing out quite a bit of the story. But the way you describe things are beautiful. Be careful not to go overboard with though. True writers do not use a single superfluous word. Make sure everything is very clear. There should be no point at which a reader feels confused or muddled. Are you ever going to finish it? I really hope you do. You are a great writer!

that was sad

You have no idea how much that story made me cry. I was terrified after chapter 15 and thought it was gonna be a sad ending. I was ready to send a very angry review. but thankfully it was a beautiful ending that had me sobbing. So well done for writing such a good story.

Oh, I think I am in love with you. This was adorable. Don't have any words to describe it, really. I just loved it.

Thanks for a wonderful story... Great writing.

HOMG! He finally talked!

Oh my GOD this is absolutely fantastic, please please please update it soon cos I really really want to know what happens! Why is poor Ennis like this? What happened to him? Please continue soon!