This is really good sofar.

It is I, King Super Cheesey! And now I will let you into my kingdom for an incredibly cheesey story! I commence you Knight or Maiden Cheesey! All hail the new cheesey! Hail thy Cheesey!

My Name is tracy.I will love to share my testimony to all the people
in the forum cos i never thought i will have my girlfriend back and
she means so much to me..The girl i want to get marry to left me 4
weeks to our weeding for another man..,When i called her she never
picked my calls,She deleted me on her facebook and she changed her
facebook status from married to Single...when i went to
her place of work she told her boss she never want to see me..i lost
my job as a result of this cos i cant get myself anymore,my life was
upside down and everything did not go smooth with my life...I tried
all i could do to have her back to all did not work out until i met a
Man when i Travel to Africa to execute some business have been
developing some years back..I told him my problem and all have passed
through in getting her back and how i lost my job...he told me he
gonna help me...i don't believe that in the first he swore
he will help me out and he told me the reason why my girlfriend left
me and also told me some hidden secrets.i was amazed when i heard that
from him..he said he will cast a spell for me and i will see the
results in the next couple of days..then i travel back to US the
following day and i called him when i got home and he said he's busy
casting those spells and he has bought all the materials needed for
the spells,he said am gonna see positive results in the next 2 days
that is Thursday...My girlfriend called me at exactly 12:35pm on
Thursday and apologies for all she had done ..she said,she never knew
what she's doing and her sudden behavior was not intentional and she
promised not to do that was like am dreaming when i heard
that from her and when we ended the call,i called the man and told him
my wife called and he said i haven't seen anything yet... he said i
will also get my job back in 3 days time..and when its Sunday,they
called me at my place of work that i should resume working on Monday
and they gonna compensate me for the time limit have spent at home
without working..My life is back into shape,i have my girlfriend back
and we are happily married now with kids and i have my job back
man is really powerful..if we have up to 20 people like him
in the world,the world would have been a better place..he has also
helped many of my friends to solve many problems and they are all
happy now..Am posting this to the forum for anybody that is interested
in meeting the man for can mail him on this e-mail
i cant give out his number cos he told me
he don't want to be disturbed by many people across the world..he said
his email is okay and he' will replied to any emails asap..hope he
helped u out too..good luck

Amazing I think you should def write more xxx :)

Very good one.

I'm impressed with the way you got the characters match your story intent.
You got it almost perfectly right i feel.

I'm looking forward for more of your story's

Greetings from Switzerland

Herby

These are the funniest HP pics ever!

. #harry%20potter%20funny%20pic

. 8/5/collegehumor.

. #funny%20Harry%20Potter%20

. ?w480#Lord%20Voldemort%20titanic

. /-zBVdUe-1diU/Thxjkbj-xoI/AAAAAAAABuw/dE4dGF_ #funny%20harry%20potter%20pic

. /-CXz57I1QD8M/TdvrJz9sYZI/AAAAAAAAAmo/KQIMQaKM_qY/s1600/HarryPotter% #harry%20potter%20funny

. #harry%20potter%20funny%20picks

images/11767508/Harry-Potter-Funny-harry-potter-22756744-310-390_ #funny%20harry%20potter%20pic

. /tumblr_lggwnyniUc1qgwhu8o1_ #dance%20tumplr

. /_ #funny%20harry%20potter

fs71/f/2011/173/9/5/funny_harry_potter_by_

you should write a sequel! i love it so much:)

Wonderful story!

I really hate the line we don't have anything to talk about. It makes it seem like all Ron cares about is sports. And that belittles him. They have much to talk about.

Duh it does. D

PLEASE PLEASE write a few more chapters! I'll do anything!

cool story

awww! so cute! please write more!

Okay, now you've gone too far! Harry's only loss was when he was attacked by the dementors and Cedric caught the snitch! Some things should remain sacred, a guy's sports record should be one of them, lol, Cute story, really enjoying it until the match, chuckles.

i like this. it was very realistic (you hit teenage angst on the head. believe me i know) and the writing was pretty good.