While I like the premise and it is...decently written, some things really stand out at me. One in particular is that, as a state alchemist, anyone who isn't a state alchemist is basically scared shit-less of him and will obey him. It's kinda like being an Inquisitor in WH40K. Basically, those soldiers, no matter their rank, would sit down and shut up when he says to leave Rose alone. In fact, he has the right to simply kill them for standing in his way.

This is pretty much why state alchemist are feared and hated.

One of the best fanfics I've ever read, if NOT the best. The plot is so brilliant! And the ending gave me chills. "Just a simple fanfic" I THINK NOT! 8D

You my friend are a genious! And I pray that you write a sequel to thisstory VERY soon! XD

This was a really good story. In my opinion you should continue it. Other than that great job.

OMG I had a total SPAZZ! when I found out when it was Envy!

I liked it...no wait...LOVED IT!

good job

Aww, so cool, love it all

This was so sweet, excellent job.

You wrote a good story! I liked the too!

you had me going at that sex scene, though i wouldnt mind if that continued :)

If you plan on making a sequel, rose should meet some guy in central and start tom like him, then ed should kill hi for no reason

but thats just me

Love the story, write more lol

I only have one word to descrive this: BRILLANT! I love this story, it was so detailed and really well done in the first person format. I love RoseXEd and I think it works better than EdXWinry.I hope you choose to write more RoseXEd stories soon!

Good luck and happy writing!

Brilliance, sheer brilliance! Your writing is amazing! So amazing, in fact, that I reread this twice before reviewing! XD But I also wonder about those loose ends. Like what the Fuhrer's 'certain purposes', or what happened with Envy after his impersonation of Rose. And, again, your writing is very nice and unique. Write more good fluffiness! _

9/10

This is cute, continue!

PS:I laughed at the part with Envy when he was pretending to be Rose, saying 'do me' lol It seemed like something he definitely do:)

AW. I loved the whole idea of Rose traveling with them after Lior, and I REALLY loved the way you handled it, especially with how comfortable they became with touching each other over time. I just thought that was real sweet.

And MY GOD, Envy never ceases to tick me off. XP Grah. Androgynous stupid palm tree- :ahem: Sorry. Anyway, I thought you handled him well, too. Ed's guilt afterwards was also very sad (but well handled). You had me worried at the end with the military and all.

Anyhow, to sum it up, I thought this was very well done and very cute. Favorited like whoa.

Aw, poor Rose. Her life doesn't seem to like her... Very funny!

; Wow...that was awesome as it was confusing...*Oggles at fluff* The awkward thing is...o_O I wrote a fic about this kind of thing happening...except it was short, corny, and Rose ends up dying at the end...that, and the feeling's one-sided. XD Not here, where it's all fluff to the very end...well, except for the strange Ed x Envy stuff...o_o God, guys are perverts..._

Anyways, Rose x Ed ROCKS THE WORLD! It's one of my favorite pairings, and I'm happy to see the fanbase slowly growing..._

Hoping for more in the future

-Puppy