*YOU SUCK ASS*

*clicks to this sucks list*

*kicks*

*_*

That was cute, but I think you need to re-write the sentence: 'Harry kissed leaned forward and Ron softly.' I assume that was supposed to be: 'Harry leaned forward and kissed Ron softly'. It just kind of ruins the effect.

Woa sweet. I never would of thought to make something so short. It seems so cool. You have a ton of talent.

Hm, cute.

Its short but it gets it point across I like PLease write more...*Squeeks*_FAVS_

Short, but good drabble..

-Peadce.