I thought I'd put it out there that here in the states a Brigadier is a one star General. It's been sticking in my craw when I hear.. oh well I got that out of my system. Keep up the great work.

Thanks for a great read, and for leaving this up warts and all!

such a wonderful and great journey this story was. a joy to read and fun characters.

thank you for writing this for all to read

Why is Harry talking like a complete head case its distracting and not in a good way it takes away from the story making it hard to read

Harry finally realizes that he is Dumbledore's pawn. He decides to get out from beneath the archwizards' thumb.
Good start.

Should also state, this isn’t always the case, and in most cases the author is quite good, and worth the read

Good fic, loving the idea, though the author needs to work on their dialogue. People seem to just state things that wouldn’t be spoken in such a way in real life. Like, “Harry. You have wings.” followed straight away by “Liz, I have wings.” This is my only real problem with it so far, other than the occasionally disjointed writing.

Thanks for giving Harry an Animagus form. I always felt like he should have had one.

Don't sell yourself short! This was an excellent chapter, and could picture the ship/craft in my mind. Wings that aren't quite distinct, seems to be feathered but doesn't actually have feathers at the same time while ago appearing to look leathery like dragon wings. The engines look metallic but are also organic and the wood seems to meld seamlessly into the black pod on the body. I understand the way you can feel something that is not actually a part of but feels real. It's a good chapter with wonderful descriptions.

This was very well done and I liked it a lot. I don't either needs any edits

A great story here!

wow. Just... wow. an amazing story.
i love how you've incorporated the Whoniverse without needing to bring in the doctor who characters, but still made it a realistic mesh of the two worlds.
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this over the last few days and will definitely be recommending it to my friends.
can't wait to read what else you've written!

heh. Sorrento... that's just down the road from where I live. less than a half hour drive.

Considering one fights alien incursions and the other is a wizard this budding relationship is a bit too casual. I assumed it would have a more suspenseful/suspicious tone with two societies meeting for the first time, but everything's been very streamlined with one side already knowing about the other :/

I hope you developed the church a bit more in these stories. It's too novel an idea in a HP fanfic for it to be unimportant.

You know, nobody who isn't discriminatory themselves notice a detail like "Hey, some of the people pointing guns at me are women." It's so besides the point (what with guns being pointed at you) it begs the question of why you thought it relevant. I'm disappointed in you Harry :p