ok I absolutely loved it. PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING! I'm a slut for well written Musa Riven dynamic. It's really hard to believe you hadn't seen the show properly.

I love your writing style! This and Black Mud Swamp are two of my favourite Winx Club fics by far!

Soo cute. And hot! Phew. I could burn up. I definitely imagine real-life Riven to be hot. I dont remember much of winx club but i remwmber their arguements. Even when they were a couple musa found ways that Riven might hurt her. Some girl giving him guitar lessons for her and all that.. whatever. I loved it.. mmm. Makes me think how hot a sex scene between them would be..

once again another thrilling fanfic and you did awesome with this couple3

Loved it. Nice twist on Muse and Riv's relationship and how they got together! Was laughing thru most of it. I honestly thought that I might cry when I read the last chapter. You are a great writer and you have great ideas for stories. You must write a sequel or some one shots about any of the characters.

I liked the way you portrayed Musa and Riven and the way they confessed their feelings to each other really fitted them. Good story :)

I absolutely love it. Especially the ending. I adore your style of writing and can't get enough of your MxR stories. You write them so well, and amazingly. I like how when you describe them when they're kissing also, because compared to other authors, you don't just describe how they kiss, you describe how they feel, and how the kissing impacts their emotions. I also like:
- how you describe small events/things with great detail, it make the story seem more realistic and believable
- how when you create other characters that aren't part of the actual show, you give them personality, but you don't ramble on for ages about them either. (Like in Memory Box chapter 1: Nessa, Pia, Sirusa etc.)

Basically I absolutely love your stories, you are my favourite author of all time, and you should never stop writing (especially MxR stories :P)

Absolutely loved it! Their dialogue was always in character, their cute moments had me melting and the action and unexpectedness of everything kept me on edge. This was brilliant; everything from the plot to the writing. I don't know how I missed this story in my early days of reading pretty much all the Musa and Riven stuff on here! I'll say it again: loved it!
Xxx

I am in love with this story. You captured the characters perfectly and the detail and vocab was incredible. I had better go or il be here all day!

ps: Can you do another Musa centered one while they are still at school?

Wow, you're an AMAZING writer! I LOVE you stories! This story is awesome! You've captured the characters so exact and its so impressive(:

Sorry for the incredibly short review. It's 2:48 pm right now and I'm tired.
I loved your planned-as-a-one-shot-but-transformed-into-a-multi-chap MusaRiven fanfiction! Remind me to elaborate after a good 8-10 hours of sleeping ;)

FDL-Chan

I tottally loved it! I just want to read it again! Musa and Riven are my tots favourite characters! :D :P

See Ya Later,

Winx-Chick

Epiloige! You should so do one! Like what happens at RF after wards, or what happens when the Winx read Musa's note. LOVED THIS STORY! You should write a sequel like the witches come and try to kill her again ir something. Note: i am a bad story person.

wow amazing story! amzain from beginin til end! luv pls continue ur writing especially Musa and Riven fanfics!3333

Lots of love,

-AdorableAsain child 3

Do u plan to add more to this story