CreamSoda1382 Please make some sequel to this Ranma 1/2 story Worlds Fall Apart please!

You really need to work on your spelling more often CreamSoda1382 seriously please!

Yeah no... The story seemed promising and actually reminded me a lot about a story idea I myself considered writing some 15 years ago... But then I noted that part with Ryoga at the end of chapter 3 and became disgusted. I know this is an older story... But still, Ryoga being paired with Ranma is even worse than the Ranma being paired with Akane. Ryoga and Ranma as a couple makes absolutely no sense as the Hibiki boy has always hated Ranma and Ranma have always found him to be a pathetic entitled whining loser deserving of being made fun of.

The final two chapters right after Ryoga left when he found out about the competition has left much to be desired. It should be happy, but all that I feel is depressed, it doesn't evoke a wish for happy endings but rather a vengeful feeling that it should end with tragedy. Everyone got off too easy. If you had just had Ryoga soften up and except Ranma after she confessed her love it would have been the perfect happy ending, but as it stands it just makes Akane, Nabiki, Ryoga seem like assholes that should suffer in the deepest and darkest reaches of hell, that they don't deserve happy endings, don't deserve a chance at redemption. Their actions deserve consequence, not just a light tap on their shoulders.

This was an awesome story. Thank you for writing it. :'3

B .EVER

When you said something was going on in the background, I thought you were talking about Ranma's mom, not Akane's dad. I was blindsided by him showing up again.
I adore this story!

I think the story peaked at the training trip, honestly. Once Akane and Ranma started their war everything started to go fast-forward. The ending in particular felt rushed.

I liked it, but the second half definitely weighed down the story as a whole in my opinion.

no.

NO.

IT DID NOT END JUST THERE.

DAMMIT THIS IS MY FAVOURITE RANMA X RYOGA FANFICTION AND I JUST REREAD IT AND AHHHHH

THE ENDING IS FREAKING PERFECT I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY

author-san, you're very talented and creative, I gotta say. I don't usually reread fanfics but this one.. it's my favourite, of course I'd reread it!

this is so beautiful, and I love this so much.. I feel like crying lol :')

REREADING 3333

Please, please, please, PLEASE! Make a sequel you're such an awesome writer! Even if it's a short one. But if you don't this is still one of my favorite stories.

Best story ever

such a romantic endin ...

I like your story, and I feel you should know bras are not for keeping breasts "perky". There for giving them support so they don't wave all over the place.

That was buetiful really I loved it so much you had me crying through half of the entire story but I am a little sad that you will not continue the story but still wonderful just perfect the best Ranma X Ryoga fan fiction I've ever read