Thanks for your story, perfect balance between action and romance, with that splash of noir that makes everything better, very well written and super addictive!

Finally! I wonder what comes next for the two lovers.

This was a sweet and lovely little story x

I am with Lucius Malfoy, I do not think it is great to go to the moon - he rightly says it is just a rock and I prefer what he can do to what Muggles can do... *thinking about the Plastic Nightmare that we seem helpless to minimise*

I wish there were spells and potions to help me with my ills.

He can turn any flower into a bird for me.

Hermione the Queen of Ultimatums.

So intriguing and love the fact that she is fantasizing about him.

Ooo I like the start of this story.

Wonderful, descriptive writing! Love the Paris description, and the sort of languid and sensual way you write Hermione. My favorite scene was when she so resourcefully and quickly knocked Malfoy down and got his wand. And his reaction afterward, calling truce and 'smiling playing at the corners of his mouth'. AND when she threw his wand into the river. Loved, loved, loved it! I'm shaking, this is so good. I can't wait to read the rest! Will be adding your story to the "XX Collective: Strong, Intelligent, Kickass Women in Fanfiction" community.

Great story. I just don't think Hermione would smoke.

What a sweet ending! About damn time! Can't blame Hermione for falling inlove with her husband.

Nice Lucius/ Hermione fic, I liked how it spanned a number of years.

Bravo! Now ll I need do is go to your author page and read all of your other stories. I know I will not be disappointed. Thank you for sharing your creative gifts.

I am thoroughly enjoying the banter between Hermione and Lucius. You have stayed true to each of their characteristics. I luv luv luv the story to far. I usually only write reviews after reading the entire story, but to every rule there is an exception. Thank you for creating this fiction.

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This going to be awesome

I enjoyed your story greatly. I like Paris setting and all the action throughout.
Now, I know you said, you don't like to write endings, but I think it, kind of, doesn't fit well with the rest of the story. The story was full of rich descriptions, which provided amazing backdrop for all the action and it was brilliant, but the ending was a little vague.
I'm saying it only, because I would love for the story to continue a little more...
Thank you for your writing
Fox xx