| Reviews for Hearts, Stars, and Horseshoes |
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wtdrmfrthwbzn chapter 2 . 7/28/2019 i like this~ i know it's unlikely you'll ever continue it, but i'd love to see more |
fhclause chapter 2 . 4/8/2012 I want more... Please update...even though it has been years... |
Vivi chapter 2 . 12/14/2009 please continue this! |
ZanaxNoct chapter 2 . 12/13/2009 Please continue this. I really like it. |
Bringer Of Fears chapter 2 . 10/7/2008 Nice I like the school setting of Japan much more than the American. But anyway great story so far, it's really very interesting and well written, update soon. |
hellobabybunnies chapter 2 . 1/26/2007 ya better finish this fanfic or at least update, or i'll massacre you... |
CerebusFire 17 chapter 1 . 8/12/2006 FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT! THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY! I love it so much you gotta finish it soon! I gotta know what happens! WooT! |
mikkimikka chapter 2 . 8/5/2006 Is the Rita figure Luke? Anyway, I really liked this. I don't normally like AU but this is great. thank you! |
Harbinger Loki chapter 2 . 8/3/2006 I don't know whether or not it is only coincidence, but I started to reread this, as it is a personal fun favorite of mine, and my media player, on shuffle, puts on the Police's 'Don't Stand So Close to Me.' Lest to say, I fell out laughing after that. XD Anyway, I love the way you keep Vincent so sardonic and absolutely 'Vinnie' without trying to compromise his personality. I love the type of relationship because it is really intriguing, though I usually go for a different approach. I also like the fact that you have done a bit of research on the type of schooling that is given with Japanese schools compared to American. I did not understand the Kirishima thing about getting changed or what it was supposed to be. If you could, could you please explain it to me. By the way, I knew Vinnie would know how to make Valentine's Day a way to make girls cry. XD (SAD-Singles Awareness Day) You keep the tension strong and for sure keep your audience very interested. Please continue soon. I love reading this tantalizing fic. |
Vaude chapter 2 . 8/1/2006 Sorry for the late review. Another extremely entertaining chapter! Your thorough knowledge of the japanese school system and pop culture is amazing, to say in the least. Unlike other AUs that I have read, the character's action dont seem forced. The interaction they share with others as well as the environment seem natural AND in-character (thank goodness). Elena as a Yamanba girl is a frightening image. Those girls are going to OD on bronzer one day. The appearance of Reeve in the beginning of this chapter was delightful, as well. And your Vincent is brilliant! My favorite part of this chapter would be how he so inconspicuously hid his erection behind the desk. Smooth one, Vinnie. Real smooth. Lolita is my favorite novel (as I have a penchant for May-December relationships), but I am happy that this story will be taken in a different direction. Despite my ardent affection for our dearest Hummy, I think Vincent would be more... tactful with his relationship. By this I mean I doubt he would try to drug Yuffie with sleeping pills in a hotel room then proceed to do the nasty. Ah, Humbert. Aw shucks. Here I was getting my hopes up for road-trip!smut. XD And you know, I bet you could write a death scene in five minutes and it would still be better than 60% of the other crap here at ffn. Ok. End of long review. And because it really doesn't count as a review unless I say this... UPDATE! |
Beatrisu chapter 2 . 7/25/2006 Another good chapter. I hope you will write more soon! |
AiriKatsu chapter 2 . 7/19/2006 Wow. It's getting interesting. *chuckle* TeacherxStudent relationships. tisk. tisk *smirking* And, uh, the whole 'gay' thing? I've never seen an approach like that. hats off to you for tryin something new! |
Mengde chapter 2 . 7/19/2006 Absolutely marvelous, really. Pen Against Sword mentioned this fiction to me and I decided to give it a look (she also linked me to Operation: Exploding Jellyfish). As this is obviously an AU, we can't really speak in terms of characterization as it would pertain to the normal FFVII universe, but honestly - bang-up job. All of the characters mentioned are behaving very true to their basic natures. I liked Vincent's inner turmoil a great deal - "She was turning him into a pervert." Conflict, wonderful. Your writing is vivid and sets whatever scene you set out to do perfectly. All in all, excellent job, and I look forward to the next update (whenever that may be). |
Kuu-sama chapter 2 . 7/18/2006 With Kirishima, are you referring to burusera shops in Japan? |
Kuro Chocobo chapter 2 . 7/17/2006 Different. Very different from the Yuffentines I've read before. And I've ready A LOT. But this is good. Just a suggestion, but since you decided to use a Japanese high school setting, maybe you can use Japanese honorifics with the characters' names? |