La la la loved it. I literally started snapping when I read that line "He gave me his heart, and the least I can do is give him my darkness." How beautiful. You have a talent! I loved this.

What did it have to do with the title?

That was so beautiful !

Normally I can't take first person smut, but this was really well-written.

You know what they say, misery loves company.

D'aww!

Tears! I have them!

Seriously though, very well written. Beautifully descriptive, wonderfully believable in terms of character, and what a heartbreakingly awesome story.

I'm repeatitive, I know, but this is just BEAUTIFUL.

Well done 3

Ohh my that was so lovely... Wonderous job!

Lovely oneshot. :)

Although some parts would have flowed better with conjunctions.

Loved it! ;-; I really disliked Conqueror of Shambala, but I like how you used it to fuel the story. :3 Nice job.

~Galenchia

Absolutely Perfect.

And Beautiful :]

That's so beautiful! I loved it! You have a talent

wow. this is probably the best royed one-shot i have every read. it was amazing.

this was beautiful.

wow...one of the only fics to bring tears to my eyes. i dont know how you did it, but that was beautiful. wow...wow...wow...

yes anothet good POV story that I have found (POV is all I have been reading for the past week) it had just the right amount of words to say everthing, yet leave you guessing. It really did sound like it was coming from Roy. you are truly a person who can write POV stories. keep it up.

This fic is just lovely! The language is so poetic. I like how you reversed their roles and you perfectly conveyed the deep love they feel for each other.