Well written character piece that could easily be canon. Great job!

The kind of wonderful fic you have to read twice to appreciate everything. Very very good work and like another reviewer has said, some beautiful lines. Yeah, Jack's a complete sucker for a damsel in distress...

Nice look at both Jack and Tegan. Liked how you wrote it. Great stuff :- )

That was a nice, neat fic. I liked it a lot, especially the last part.

"Jack had seen someone who had walked out of Hell and left her heart behind." I wish I could write lines like that!

Well done.

R.