| Reviews for Forlorn |
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   Lord Vaserious chapter 6 . 7/13 Operation save Neji is in operation. |
| Lord Vaserious chapter 5 . 7/13 Jyriah is useless as a teacher no matter the story. |
| Lord Vaserious chapter 4 . 7/13 Fantastic stuff! The gang's together now! |
| Lord Vaserious chapter 3 . 7/13 Great |
| Lord Vaserious chapter 2 . 7/13 Gaara is so cute! |
| Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 7/13 Awesome stuff |
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/1 that is completely illogical orochimaru put the mark of curse on sasuke for the sharingan that I give to haku is a script does not make sense I hope you give him at least |
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/1 because Naruto is so weak this part is supposed to be stronger than gara in the canon and here apparently he is the weakest of all |
| buuuuuuu chapter 9 . 3/31 because naruto is the most devil of all? |
| LordHatredX chapter 30 . 8/11/2019 okay story ! ! |
| arsenicminds chapter 11 . 6/18/2019 we stan ot3 |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 30 . 12/24/2018 This story was so freaking amazing. I was wary at first of an all boy team, especially one under Jiraiya, but you both made it work splendidly. Anyway, Well done. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 6 . 12/21/2018 I didn't really know what to expect from this story. I am enjoying it thus far. |
| Honeymeandog chapter 30 . 9/1/2018 I read this story a few months ago and am currently reading the sequel, but I wanted to say that this is a great fic! I loved how you developed Gaara and Haku especially. My only reservation about this story is I felt the physical affection between the couples happened too soon (they're 12/13 years old and I think that's too young). But otherwise, GREAT JOB! :) |
| death390 chapter 22 . 7/16/2018 It was so good up until Hiruzen vs Orochimaru. There is no way he would have left Minato unbound. Perhaps not controlled but certainly would have been bound in some way. |
