| Reviews for Destiny and Fate |
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EmpressMinea chapter 7 . 9/4/2011 Please update this as soon as u can;) |
Breeluv chapter 7 . 4/2/2011 wow i just cant wait to see what happens:) |
maura chapter 7 . 10/12/2010 what happened you needs to update i'm usually the silent reader but abandoning a story like this tsk tsk |
x-2TheGrave-x chapter 7 . 3/15/2008 D: THIS IS AMAZING! I love how everything is slowly falling together, instead of this being a quick drabble. Very nice indeed. :3 |
Muse08 chapter 7 . 12/9/2007 Very nicely written, I enjoyed reading it and I cannot wait for an update XD the cliffy! The horrible cliffy! I'm liking this fic more and more by the chapter, it's easy to read, and ever so slightly humorous. I like the plot quite a bit as well. :3 Good job! Now for the horrible... critique. Mwahahaha! I wouldn't say you wrote too dramatically, in my opinion you seem to start into some drama nicely but back out of it a little too quickly. I'm still an armature writer myself, mind you, so I could be horribly, horribly wrong but I think perhaps you should try dabbling with drama a little more. Also, sometimes your characters can be a little too calm, work a little harder on character development. I'll have you know I had to wrack my brain for that critique('cause I know you like 'em) I really hope my advice helps your writing(I'm not so sure I'm any good at giving advice ;)! If you disagree with any of my pointers feel free to tell me(I need critiques too XD) I've written a few other Princess Tutu fics, and I would absolutely adore if you would read them! I'm really happy you liked my other fic(you made me blush with your compliment) and I hope you enjoy the others as well :3 Have a wonderful evening, -Muse-chan working on Doujinshi's! |
michelle 123 chapter 7 . 12/1/2007 awesome chapter,i enjoyed reading the story although i should say fakir blushing so much was so unusual but it was so funny i had to laugh,i loved it. |
Fujiwara Kumiko chapter 7 . 11/17/2007 You updated! D Guess what? I just came over my writer's block! I'm currently working on the next chapter of my Gakuen Alice Fic. xD Good chapter! Keep it up! ~Your dear friend. |
James Birdsong chapter 7 . 11/13/2007 Hey you promised to throw out Mytho plushies this time. Oh well excellent chapter. |
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 11/13/2007 You're welcome. Be encouraged! Yes I liked this chapter as well. Yay for your awesome writing style. *catches a Fakir plushie and hugs it* |
Kawaii Sakuna chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 Ah, I really like how your story is going. Hope you write more soon |
Hanyoubanshee chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 QUA-! Silly cliffhangers! Such cruelty, update soon please. |
Technopoptart chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 Soo cute! I am gonna have fun with this chapter! Oh by the way! I'll Pm you with my email so we can talk fanart!11 haa haa i think Ivan sensei is totally gonna be my favorite "side-character!" |
Haruka Minamino chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 Um. Something got cut. "It wouldn’t do at all for him to be late, since he" - Continuation please. v_0 That's all. Good job! v_~v |
FreeSpiritProductions chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 Very good story! I love your fanfics and am greatful that you updated it today! Keep up the good work! : D |
LunarStar Princess Krystal chapter 7 . 11/12/2007 Great chapter, now there's a good stop. I wonder how the conversation will go. Please Update Soon V |