Reviews for Destiny and Fate
EmpressMinea chapter 7 . 9/4/2011
Please update this as soon as u can;)
Breeluv chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
wow i just cant wait to see what happens:)
maura chapter 7 . 10/12/2010
what happened you needs to update i'm usually the silent reader but abandoning a story like this tsk tsk
x-2TheGrave-x chapter 7 . 3/15/2008
D: THIS IS AMAZING! I love how everything is slowly falling together,

instead of this being a quick drabble.

Very nice indeed. :3
Muse08 chapter 7 . 12/9/2007
Very nicely written, I enjoyed reading it and I cannot wait for an update XD the cliffy! The horrible cliffy! I'm liking this fic more and more by the chapter, it's easy to read, and ever so slightly humorous. I like the plot quite a bit as well. :3 Good job!

Now for the horrible... critique. Mwahahaha!

I wouldn't say you wrote too dramatically, in my opinion you seem to start into some drama nicely but back out of it a little too quickly. I'm still an armature writer myself, mind you, so I could be horribly, horribly wrong but I think perhaps you should try dabbling with drama a little more. Also, sometimes your characters can be a little too calm, work a little harder on character development.

I'll have you know I had to wrack my brain for that critique('cause I know you like 'em) I really hope my advice helps your writing(I'm not so sure I'm any good at giving advice ;)! If you disagree with any of my pointers feel free to tell me(I need critiques too XD)

I've written a few other Princess Tutu fics, and I would absolutely adore if you would read them! I'm really happy you liked my other fic(you made me blush with your compliment) and I hope you enjoy the others as well :3

Have a wonderful evening,

-Muse-chan working on Doujinshi's!
michelle 123 chapter 7 . 12/1/2007
awesome chapter,i enjoyed reading the story although i should say fakir blushing so much was so unusual but it was so funny i had to laugh,i loved it.
Fujiwara Kumiko chapter 7 . 11/17/2007
You updated! D Guess what? I just came over my writer's block! I'm currently working on the next chapter of my Gakuen Alice Fic. xD

Good chapter! Keep it up!

~Your dear friend.
James Birdsong chapter 7 . 11/13/2007
Hey you promised to throw out Mytho plushies this time. Oh well excellent chapter.
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 11/13/2007
You're welcome. Be encouraged!

Yes I liked this chapter as well.

Yay for your awesome writing style.

*catches a Fakir plushie and hugs it*
Kawaii Sakuna chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
Ah, I really like how your story is going. Hope you write more soon
Hanyoubanshee chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
QUA-!

Silly cliffhangers! Such cruelty, update soon please.
Technopoptart chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
Soo cute! I am gonna have fun with this chapter! Oh by the way! I'll Pm you with my email so we can talk fanart!11

haa haa i think Ivan sensei is totally gonna be my favorite "side-character!"
Haruka Minamino chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
Um. Something got cut.

"It wouldn’t do at all for him to be late, since he" - Continuation please. v_0

That's all.

Good job! v_~v
FreeSpiritProductions chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
Very good story!

I love your fanfics and am greatful that you updated it today!

Keep up the good work!

: D
LunarStar Princess Krystal chapter 7 . 11/12/2007
Great chapter, now there's a good stop. I wonder how the conversation will go. Please Update Soon V
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