Wow! It's been eleven years since the last time I left a review on this fic. It's such a shame it's seemingly been abandoned - it's just so good, and I want to know how it ends! I think of all the fics I've read, this one has the most interesting take on Yosho. The characters are spot on, and so's the writing. Oh well... I'm not one to talk, I have a bad habit of taking long hiatuses too. ;)

this is actually one of the few TM fics that keeps the characters in-character, so kudos for that. the premise you've set up here is really interesting, and it's entertaining to see Ryoko at her worst when we're so used to that kinder gentler (but still really uncouth and insufferable) person Tenchi has turned her into. i love that she's learning sword techniques from Yosho, it's really unusual to see any fic that touches on the complicated relationship he obviously has with Ryoko; it's kind of a breath of fresh air.

i'm sad it's unfinished and likely abandoned, but if you're ever inclined to pick it up again, i'd certainly like to read the rest of it one day.

ah I can't wait to read more if there is any!

Nice story! I can't wait to read more!

First, I think you may have the most interesting young Yosho in the business.

Second, I really like the story and, since you last updated only a year ago, I'll hold out a tiny bit of hope that you return to it.

I always thought having an amnesiac Ryoko would be an appropriate hell for Tenchi, and the perfect catalyst to wake him up. There's one other fic that deals with this somewhere-though in that one, Ryoko regresses to a younger, innocent stage-and NEITHER of you finished after setting up a really fascinating take on the characters. Still, even unfinished, I'm glad I read it again.

What a shame that you haven't updated in almost a year. I really wanted to know what happened next.

so far ... THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME!

CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!

KEEP ON WRITING!

I am truly intrigued at your fanfic, it's one of the better Ryoko fics out there. I love your plot and can't wait to read more. You make your characters dynamic while keeping them in their original cast- that's a job well done.

Nice story so far I hope you can undate soon it'd be great to see how this will turn out. (:

Nice story so far I hope you can undate soon it'd be great to see how this will turn out. (:

Love love love

Please write more i thought this would never be continued:) please:)

Wow it's been a long time! I couldn't review chapter 8 because I alrady had, so I did it in this one.

I liked the first story but I think this change is better for the story :) I'm really gad you update and I'm looking forward the next chap!

This is a really great story so far and I like it A LOT. I can tell that you're writing really has really improved since the first chapters and I congratulate you on this. The latest chapter was especially well written since you wrote in your own "voice". I also like what you've done with each of the character's back stories. You managed to keep everyone in character with the exception of Washu (I feel she is just slightly out of character in some instances, but not much) though that is easily overlooked in favor of a great plot and good writing. I really loved Yosho's chapter especially, because of the unique way you chose to portray the events leading up to the current day as well as the background information you provided us with. Even though I still can't see Ayeka beating Ryoko so badly in a fight (xD;;;), I still enjoy this story a lot and hope you update soon!

-Rain

Im so very happy that u did what u did!

The cemistry between tenchi and ryoko is just unbelievable, the tension is so real u can almost touch it.

U write everything that I want from a tenchi/ryoko fic, and Im so happy ure gonna continue it.

I'd like this to be a full movie or something.. I wish.

Love it! /elin