Reviews for Outside The Window
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
ONG. ALL THERES A BRICK WLAL ONGOMG
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
WHAT THE FUK PW,SM WHHAT THE F FUCK THISS ISS SOO PAIN FUL WHY WHAT FHE FUCK THE ENDING OH MY FUC KINB GODF
Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Owwww! This story hurts!
Akatsuki Fatale chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Wow. Ok. Really, then. *throws laptop across the room* Why would you do that?!
Darkflower123 chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Oh. My. Fucking. God. THAT WAS SO DEPRESSING! *sob* You should have added tragedy to the genres...
Deadfield chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
How could you do this to me I feel attacked right now (very well written, your prose was impeccable and your descriptive devices rival published authors. I'll be checking some of your other works as soon as possible.)
NS-Shizaya chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
thanks for ruining my life
My Lunatic Crow chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Holy shit man! Gosh, the tears just won't stop coming, this is just so bitter sweet and just so great. I'm just like, ugh, I don't know, this story made a mess out of me. I need some tissues.
SoraROCK chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
I'm crying for Sora... I would love to tell storyteller for Riku
tomaya-san chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
I found this story years ago and it made me cry so much. thank you for writing this I loved it!
SilverWingDragon151 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
*TEARS SOBS AND CRIES*
I love this so much words can't even... *Sniffle* Oh my Gawd... I can't...
...I just... can't... I...can't...form...any...
words... for...this...beautiful... heartwrenching...oh my lords...This... feels...omigawd... I can't... *SOBS CRIES TEARS*
The tears...are forever...caked...to my face... and are traveling...down my neck... Oh...I can't... I just... *TEARS*
Thank you for this beautiful masterpeice... For this I will find words... My favorite fanfiction...ever...And I go here...daily... *Sob, Cry, Sniffle, tears*
...Thank you...
ObsessivePecan chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Guh this had me sobbing into my pillow for a good twenty minutes. Good work.

I noticed a few grammar mistakes but overall it was a nice piece of writing! you have a lot of potential and you're already very talented. Keep it up!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
I've read such a story before. It's a published work in an Elemental Literature book for 10th graders (where I read this). I'm sure the true author of this touching plot would be very appreciative of a disclaimer from you.
Vanitas' Queen21 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
oh my god! i just about died when they said sora didn't make it!
and the ending was just so saddening! i guess even when you can't see what's really going on...your heart can lead you on all kinds of adventures.
i think that's what sora was doing for riku since he couldn't see.
BexxIlluser chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Oh good god, this fic is amazing, completely beautiful, so very sweet and so very heartbreaking at the same time.

I read it from start to finish and cried my eyes out at the 'brick wall' bit. Every time I re-read it, I still cry!

Your writing is really incredible, I honestly felt like I was right there watching everything with Riku and Sora.

Thank you so much! D
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