| Reviews for Outside The Window |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2016 ONG. ALL THERES A BRICK WLAL ONGOMG |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2015 WHAT THE FUK PW,SM WHHAT THE F FUCK THISS ISS SOO PAIN FUL WHY WHAT FHE FUCK THE ENDING OH MY FUC KINB GODF |
Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 6/11/2015 Owwww! This story hurts! |
Akatsuki Fatale chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 Wow. Ok. Really, then. *throws laptop across the room* Why would you do that?! |
Darkflower123 chapter 1 . 8/21/2014 Oh. My. Fucking. God. THAT WAS SO DEPRESSING! *sob* You should have added tragedy to the genres... |
Deadfield chapter 1 . 8/9/2014 How could you do this to me I feel attacked right now (very well written, your prose was impeccable and your descriptive devices rival published authors. I'll be checking some of your other works as soon as possible.) |
NS-Shizaya chapter 1 . 7/30/2014 thanks for ruining my life |
My Lunatic Crow chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Holy shit man! Gosh, the tears just won't stop coming, this is just so bitter sweet and just so great. I'm just like, ugh, I don't know, this story made a mess out of me. I need some tissues. |
SoraROCK chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 I'm crying for Sora... I would love to tell storyteller for Riku |
tomaya-san chapter 1 . 5/26/2014 I found this story years ago and it made me cry so much. thank you for writing this I loved it! |
SilverWingDragon151 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013 *TEARS SOBS AND CRIES* I love this so much words can't even... *Sniffle* Oh my Gawd... I can't... ...I just... can't... I...can't...form...any... words... for...this...beautiful... heartwrenching...oh my lords...This... feels...omigawd... I can't... *SOBS CRIES TEARS* The tears...are forever...caked...to my face... and are traveling...down my neck... Oh...I can't... I just... *TEARS* Thank you for this beautiful masterpeice... For this I will find words... My favorite fanfiction...ever...And I go here...daily... *Sob, Cry, Sniffle, tears* ...Thank you... |
ObsessivePecan chapter 1 . 6/24/2013 Guh this had me sobbing into my pillow for a good twenty minutes. Good work. I noticed a few grammar mistakes but overall it was a nice piece of writing! you have a lot of potential and you're already very talented. Keep it up! |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/24/2013 I've read such a story before. It's a published work in an Elemental Literature book for 10th graders (where I read this). I'm sure the true author of this touching plot would be very appreciative of a disclaimer from you. |
Vanitas' Queen21 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012 oh my god! i just about died when they said sora didn't make it! and the ending was just so saddening! i guess even when you can't see what's really going on...your heart can lead you on all kinds of adventures. i think that's what sora was doing for riku since he couldn't see. |
BexxIlluser chapter 1 . 9/22/2012 Oh good god, this fic is amazing, completely beautiful, so very sweet and so very heartbreaking at the same time. I read it from start to finish and cried my eyes out at the 'brick wall' bit. Every time I re-read it, I still cry! Your writing is really incredible, I honestly felt like I was right there watching everything with Riku and Sora. Thank you so much! D |