This story is just to adorable, I think I may just die. I love the writing style you used!~

This has quite a sweet ending. It's pretty interesting.

that. was. adorable. aww... Edmund's freckles are snowflakes! how fecking cute! i love it (heart).

-tac

You have an excellent grasp of english. Loved it!

Aw, that's so cute! I was a little wary about reading this at first because of the warnings, but I'm very glad I did. Your descriptions of all the siblings and Edmund's introspection is very well-done and very much in character. And I loved the ending. :) It would be very interesting to see Peter's side of this as well . . .

FreeDaChickens

I don't usually read slash but I saw that amitai had a translation out which she did amazingly well on. I would read the original but I do not understand French, so I can't. :( However I checked to see what english stories you have and I saw this one. It is very well written- though English isn't your mother language you use it with more talent than a lot of fanfic authors who only write in English. I didn't notice spelling errors and there were no grammatical errors (better than almost all the fanfiction authors I've seen) so congratulations on that! I also like it's poetical nature- it adds to the story a lot!

Wow, you have a stunning grasp on the intricacies of language. That was just beautiful.

~Ani

very nicely done!

What to say? Extremely well written, as usual. Loved it too, as usual. )

Just Magnificent. ;)

'bad english' my ass! That was beautiful!~

Beautiful.

I liked it a lot. :-)

That was... really touching. I was leery at first, because of the pairing, but you made it work really well. The boys truly are winter and summer-you made an excellent juxtaposition of the two. I'd love to see inside Peter's mind during this... do you feel you could write a sequel from his point of view?

Loved it!

-Syringe

beautiful! I LOVE IT!

Still as gorgeous here as it was on LJ. That is, I think I read it on LJ. o_o