Please continue on with the story, I'm really enjoying it so far. Please don't leave me on a cliffhanger!

wonderful story, Jiraiya. you gave it so much plot, that compared to some of these stories we are wading through plot. but also a wonderful love story and adventure. I wish you could of finished it. but I understand when life gets in your way. I hope that you are still writing in some form, because ive read some other of your works and this one by far is my fav. but I hope you are still writing because you do an in redible job. congrates

This is really good you should be proud

Just rereading a lot of things on my favorites list and found this there. It's an awesome little adventure and I'm sad to see it was never finished. If you ever get the chance or inspiration I'd love to see it continued or perhaps just cliff notes of how the story was supposed to be resolved. Thanks for the story.

Kudos to you for writing this

I've liked the directions you have taken throughout the story, caught me off guard a couple of times (in good ways). I really enjoy your writing style. hope you come back to this story, glad I have read it!

Ooo this is getting really interesting!

Aww~ shucks /

bookmark

i know its been a while butt please, please update

ooo look at iruka teasing Kakashi, also love that part in which iruka goes " screw the rules I want a hot bath"

this was really good

oh dear

I wonder what Iruka looks like with short hair..

haha, I dont think that was his 'scroll'.