Guess who's still crying after 'Monochrasmitic' (I forgot the title of the story haha)

It’s hard to imagine Naruto being like this but it is expected considering his past. This is even more sadder knowing how much he had suffered and was the most happy during his time with his loved ones. I can’t believe Ino was the last straw before he tumbled.

Love this!

I am weeping. Painful and sad and and I have no words

While this works very well as a standalone, I think it works better if you have read monochromatic. It conveys a lot more feeling and sadness when you realise that Ino's death had driven naruto into such a state as the one he is currently in, that you can't help but feel sad. Overall great story and I want you to know that it really touched me.

now this was more sad yet very beautiful. you know the kind that makes you space out and sigh? and after a couple of minutes, sigh again?

you are just too good. i love you. its official.

WOW this is some plot line, one of the best i've read so far, and trust me i don't compliment like that much, keep it up dude

So sad! Need happier ones ) JK I love your work

Absolutely Superb :)

Kill all happiness, make everyone miserable... And you call this a romance/spiritual? It's not your ending that's crappy, it's that your story has no vision past that of morbidity. Structurally and syntactically it's sound, but to what end?

aw that was sad

-sniff-cliff hanger ending-tear-...too sad.:[but well written

I'ts a very sad story. X(

Poor Naruto !

STUPID LITTLE B*!

Why did you make it end like that!

*huf* good writing...btw...

Vizio

Wow.

Poor Naruto..

Poor everyone, actually. 'Cause I don't think that there is anyone who wouldn't be affected by Ino's death.

...Wow.

Woah, kinda on the heavy side. ;. Good job and keep up the good work!