Reviews for Monster Within
iamladyliberty chapter 5 . 9/4/2009
just a quick note to tell you that i really enjoyed this. i completely see why you picked up on this, and i think you make an excellent case for booth's feelings about his actions with ortez not being fully realized on the show. really nice work!

thanks for writing!
RowdyRomantic chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
Very nice!

I loved :

“Booth, if I ever found out someone put a hit out on you,” she interrupted, stroking his cheek with her hand. “You would be forced to charge me with another felony.”

“Really?” Seeley smiled and cocked his head to the side. “You’d definitely never get your hands on a gun again.”

You write FF very well I can't beleive you only posted two stories.

Becca
Wen1 chapter 4 . 4/9/2007
excellent, really good descriptions, that's a good fic ;)
Wen1 chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
lololol

excellent
Wen1 chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
hihihi that's funny
Bsquared19 chapter 5 . 1/11/2007
I just read this!

Wonderful story! I can totally see most of that happening. (Except the part where Booth hits her, even drunk and out of control I don't think he would, but who knows.)
JadedOne47 chapter 5 . 1/2/2007
I don't know what you're talking about, you're a great writer, and trust me, I read more fanfic than i'm sure is good for me. YOu do a fab job. Keep it up. Though, i'd love to know what happened next.
WhisperingLeaves chapter 5 . 11/30/2006
Gosh, I haven't been to this site in a long time, and I haven't written a fanfic since 7th grade I think, and since I'm now in 12th, it's been a while! After reading your story, I feel like I need to share a few of my stories as well.

I love this story, you had the formula quite correct. I liked how you mixed the right amount of fluff, while still staying true to the personalities of the pair.

All I have to say is B squared baby! lol

~*Candice*~
willowwood chapter 5 . 6/29/2006
Loved It.
noitcifnaf chapter 5 . 6/6/2006
oh, this is just BEGGING for a sequel, what happens directly after this? i really like your style of writing,good job
Aemie chapter 5 . 6/5/2006
and one, two, three... "Aw!"

lol, that was lovely, congrats on a grweat story!
lemmingduck chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I really liked this story.. It was deep and moving. I hope you write more.
lemmingduck chapter 5 . 6/5/2006
I liked it alot. I thought all the disclaimers were hilarious about the library and banana republic.
mendenbar chapter 5 . 6/5/2006
I can picture Booth as a happy drunk. What a sight! Anywho, I liked your story a lot. Keep up the work.
canthereisto chapter 5 . 6/5/2006
loved htat! great conclusion there.

Ava
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