i'm now lovin the song, i'm probably gonna bore the hell out of my friends with it now, great

Gosh I loved it! So cool! Hope you write another like that. Great job!

I am now obssessed with the Cell Block Tango after reading this fanfic, & now I got my friend addicted to it too! I have the translation for the Hungarian part! "What am I doing here? They say that the famous lakem kept down my husband & I stoke off his head. But this is true, I am not guiltless. I don't know why Uncle Sam says that I did it. I tried to explain everything at the police station, but they didn't understand me..." I don't know the final part.

great job on the lyrics. Have you ever seen the play, or just the movie. the spitting suggests play, but you can never be to sure these days. Great story, expecially that last bit with caleb coming to "protect" Elyon so that he could see cornelia. i've always been about young love.

This made me laugh. Good choice of song. I liked it

A Lip Sync? What gave you that idea? Meh. Its ok, but couldn't you have picked a shorter song? The Cell Block Tango is too long.

good chapter but this one turned me off a bit a few times but its going well and easy so keep it up _

nice chapter, good start and not a bad ending

keep it up! _

It's nice.