hi there~

so i want to say that i am totally in love with your story "Seeing Past"! :)

it's quite intriguing. i love the relationship everybody has in here, the family/friendship one not the crazy lusting thing lol. though i do read lusting fics too, but i prefer family/friendship.

i'm going crazy, i really want to know what happened to kyo's hands. Is it akito? or maybe kyo is hurting himself? or maybe he got into a big giant mess with somebody and got hurt? haha i love this enigma, it's intriguing.

plus i love that kyo doesn't tell anybody what's wrong with him, thus causing everybody to worry about him. love that family worrying stuff, i think it's so cute! yuki and shigure freaked out haha. i love that. i hate when people write fics and kyo gets hurt and the family doesn't react. i mean, come on, of course they would care they are family after all:)

so, so glad that you made them all care. kudos to you ! :D

so love the angsty stuff, the mystery,and the family bond~ it was a very good two chapters, but when are you going to update again?

i have read this story about five times already. i'm really hoping that you would update soon. i rarely pm anybody (or review) unless i'm really desperate to see what happens it their story lol.

so could you please possibly consider an update for this, pleaseeeeeee?

for your loyal readers/ reviewers :)

i will be waiting, no matter how long~

and i alerted this amazing piece~

oh! this is interesting~

i love fics where yuki and kyo's relationship is more of the family type, not really the lusting one. haha

i really want to know what happen to kyo's hand. did he twist it? i have the feeling that akito has something to do with it or maybe kyo is being angsty again and hurt himself

please update soon, for your loyal readers~

i know it's been awhile, but perhaps you could still give this awesome fic a chance :)

alerted this :)

REALLY GOOD! UPDATE SOON!

hi! this is a really good story, but i was just wondering if you were going to update?

This is great! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I hope you update soon!

i demand that you write more

more dammit

this is good!

Hmm, it seems that Kyo was hurted. I wonder who had hurted him. Would the others find out soon? Maybe it would be Yuki seems he noticed Kyo's fingers and so on. Please post the next chapter quickly!

This story sounds good. I can't wait for you to up date.

-Tuosto

That's cool so far.

You must update!

~Dukoro-chan

YAY! an update!

it was really good but i want MORE! so get workin until ur fingers start bleeding! J/k update soon please! and what the hell is wrong with kyo? hmm does it have anything to do with akito? hes always suspect #1 yup!

i love it! please update soon. i only have one correction to make. Yuki's hair is not black. it's grayish purple. i love it! please don't keep me waiting for more...

Great Beginning, a bit short but I still loved it. :D

I agree with FurubaFreak22, it is hard to find a story with both Kyo and Yuki in that is not yaoi.

Keep it up and 'Update Soon' :D

~*~*SuperSaiyanPenguin*~*~

Though this was short I liked the mystery you put in it. I look forward to you're next update.

THANKYOU! *glomps* finally! a story that involves boy kyo kun and yuki, but is not yaoi! thanks again, and update soon!

Why didn't they check his room before panicking? Wouldn't that be the logical first place to look for anybody? Now, they'd still have reason to be concerned since Kyo doesn't normally oversleep, but still...why did everyone suddenly assume he wasn't anywhere in the house? ...And why didn't Tohru notice during breakfast? She may be a ditz, but I don't think she's blind... Yuki not at breakfast...slightly understandable. Kyo not at breakfast...weird.

Anyway... there were some grammar and spelling errors, but not as many as I expected when you said there would be some. Just proofread a little more carefully (or a couple more times...) and you should be able to catch most of your mistakes. They aren't anything too drastic. If you need proofreading/revising tips, check out my profile. I have various lists of things to look for when revising chapters. Granted, they aren't all inclusive, but they're a good start, if nothing else.

It seems like an interesting concept for a story, I hope it goes well for you. _