Nice and interesting stories.

This was amzing.

Wish you would have added more, not sure what though.

Really liked how you thought of Temari.

Good fic

I think this was GREAT. The insight from her perspective is excellent! I would have liked a bit more on the last part with the rescue of Gaara, but that's me. I know it's been awhile, but I kind of hope you get a wild hare and decide to write a bit more into this ... maybe take it into a story instead of just a reflection. Still, I really enjoyed it. Keep writing. ~del

That was an amazing story. Wow. I like seeing Naruto through Temari's viewpoint like that.

-demonicnargles

This is pretty good! Hope you add some more when Shippuden advances.

A good ending I suppose.

Thank you for it. _

~KF~

Nice story! It's got a charm to it that I can't help but like.

It's impressive that you've re-told events directly from the series, but managed to keep my attention all the same.

Well done.

sweet

Awesome chapter, as always. It makes my morning to read great works such as yours.

Also, AdrianTepes001, I think what he was trying to portray, is that Naruto only used minor amount of the demon chakra at the end of the fight, to break off the sand. Not for the previous feats (I thought the same thing until I re-read it.)

This is one of the most imaginative series, your takes is incredibly creative and insightful. i was so glad to see this get updated. not clear if you're done with this story from the Author's note but i hope you continue

One relatively minor but important flub (I think).

Gaara says he knows demonic chakra but didn't sense any during the fight with Naruto. However, it's made abundantly clear in the anime and in the manga, that for that last boost, the one that rips off Naruto's headband and jacket, that is the chakra of the 9 tails.

So maybe Gaara isn't familiar with the Kitsune's chakra enough to tell the difference between it and Naruto's.

Though you probably know better by now, 'gennin' is incorrect, as there are only two 'n's in the spelling of 'genin'. Also, it is 'Tajuu Kage Bunshin', not 'Taiju'. Keep on updating.

This was well written, and I love that you chose to make it through Temari's point of view. I think it's exactly what she would have thought.

man i totally forgot about how awesome this story was/is. and i state that you are an awesome writer.