Reviews for The Bath
Thayanne Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/25/2019
Simplesmente AMEI! Perfeito! Incomparável!
BeliBali chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Cool, I like it. Erotic and sensual. Wonderful. I am glad I looked to see what you have written. You NEED to write MORE!
jennperry22 chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
As a diehard fan of PEAhopeless's V for Vendetta world, I can honestly say that your "plotless episodes" add nothing to her world that SHE HAS CREATED and that YOU ARE RIPPING OFF OF!

I'm sorry if this upsets you, but if you can't at least try to make your own world then you should probably keep these little episodes to yourself. They say that imitation is the best form of flattery, but your "V" is so completely out of sync with PEAhopeless's "V".

Again, I hope you don't take this personally, but you really need to take the time to sit down and develop YOUR OWN V for Vendetta world. When and if you do, I will gladly read it.

P.S. From the looks of it, you are not a bad writer. You just need to develop your own characters.
Snickle-Gigger chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Love the idea (Evey driving V absolutely insane just by taking a bath...brilliant) but V did indeed seem extraordinarily OOC. He's not that direct; he's more subtle that that, and normally won't just come right out and say such things. (He's such a tease).

Good writing style; just work on your characterization a bit.
KELAndSoMuchMore chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Though you seem to be deleting all critical reviews, I nevertheless must add in my two cents. While the idea is cute - a bathing Evey driving V's more human side mad - you've written him VERY OOC. He's not to direct as that - if he wants to say something, he'll say it in quotes and verse, never entirely directly stating his meaning while still getting the idea across perfectly well. Unless asked to be direct, of course.

Still, definately keep writing. If you try, I bet you could better grasp his personality in a few fics. :3
firstmorningdew chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
*giggles*
Tree chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Tee hee love it!