I am done .

So the ministry of Magic is looking for Fleur so they just wander around like it is not a problem or did you forget what you wrote earlier?
What are the rest of the Order members going to say when they come back and see her there?

So her mother goes from beating her to doing a one eighty like nothing e we happened.

Threatening not to update to get reviews is extremely tacky and immature.

What will the rest of the Weasleys do when they find out what happened I wonder? As usual Ron is an idiot with no brain to mouth is going to cause trouble for the girls.

Why are you wasting your time with Ginny and Luna? They are nothing to the story at are the rest of the order doing while those two are acting like sluts and making Hermione and Fleur life miserable for no need to be sent to the Burrows and let Molly handle them soon before Hermione loses it and does something she might regret.

Don't have a clue what or where you are going with this.I feel sorry for Fleur's bitch of a mother if Hermione meets her after finding what she did to her daughter just because she doesn't want to screw a guy and make grandbabies for her.

Why are you writing Luna as a cunt? Has she been cursed along with Ginny?

I am not sure if you had a plot when you started this story. What else is going on in the war around those while they are finding their love for each other?

Hoping it gets would the British ministry of magic believe that the Veela would be Voldemort supporters considering they fought against him on the British side in the first wizard war?

Is Fleur's father so whipped that he will let her mother beat her?

RIP Remus

Thinks you should know better than that!

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Unless my memory fails me, she physically abused her daughter. I don't give a damn if she had the best intentions, what she did was still completely wrong.

Mm... Resolution wih Fleur's parents, I hope? I want her to reunite wih at least her little sister. :)