So i dont understand how chapters 2, 4 and 6 fit into the rest of the story

Another dark chapter! I think Chapter 5 and Chapter 7 gets to me because drug dealing and abuse by a vain parent is so real...whereas Hinata giggling over a death book is surreal.

I've read through four chapters of Hinata's death to do list and Naruto being annoying, but this, wow, NOW I think it gets dark!

This is a fantastic fantastic story. Very nicely done.

... ok paying for an assassination on that woman right the fuck now.

Oh this is lovely :)

why the heck is iruka in it?

Hinata is Awesome. I can so totally see this. I have the shivers in a good way.

Unfortunately, there are people who go through this type of torture, the same as Ino in this fic. And, like her, that blade often times appears to be the only way out. The truly tragic thing is, when that route is taken, the offending parent many times refuses to understand that they were the driving force that led to that unfortunate eventuality, blaming any- and everything but themselves. I have known girls in school who were deathly afraid of one parent or the other, but they kept the reasons and the fear hidden.
One girl stands out in particular, who feared her mom. I heard her talking with a friend of hers at one point, and she claimed her mother was a practicing witch (something that didn't surprise me, as we have many proclaimed wiccen in the area), but what did surprise me was her next statement. She said her mother would scry for her at various points throughout the day, watching what she did and with whom, and then if she didn't receive straight A's on her report card, would punish her severely. I could tell by her actions and her speech that she was truly in fear of her mother and what she would find out or do.
So, yeah, it's a sad fact of life that Ino's plight in this story is not as isolated or fictional as we all would like to think.

I love this idea. He wants the villagers to get headaches if they glare at him! I can just imagine the years old prank... XD
That old lady seems nice, though.

wow this chapter is agreedable, considering what kakashi is looking like under his mask...

At the end of the day, this story lacked head or tails.
It is just something written.

...I can see that happing

I was surprised there was plot! The first few chapters didn't seem to have any, so it surprised me when it suddenly all came together, but I like what you did with the place. I'd love to know what Orochi thinks about it. And yeah, he seems insane...

This chapter was freaking hilarious. Amazing.