Very funny. You captured the characters well. I really miss this show.

I thought your story was good. Nice well written bit about the team. And then you had them in Carson's hands and I started laughing like a mad woman and scaring my son. I loved every bit of this story. Thank you.

Oh my! I am slowly working my way through these stories and each one is a gem! I just love how you write my fave team! Love the snark...it's perfect! Never meant meanly by any of them, it states the obvious but in a loving, comraderie way! Absolutely love your writing! Very clever, very well thought out! Cudos!

Fabulous!

"But I don't see a bedpan."

-i was LMAO for 10 minutes :D i swews ! thanks

Wow, that was fantastic! It was one of the best pieces of h/c I've read. You really had the voices down, plus a good plot, tons of suspense, and I love Carson's complaints about Rodney at the end. Especially the inflatable sheep! Thank you so much for sharing.

Love the story. The I spy made me crack up thanks ;-)

The image of them, limping, leaning against each other, through the gate...is just brilliant.

I have a sneaking suspicion that it will be stuck in my head for a long time coming...if only I was better at drawing people...I might try to doodle it...alas...that wouldn't turn out well.

Still...lovely imagery...absolutely lovely imagery~~3

~Zirra

A really lovely fic. Very IC and totally what they would all too. Love it! :D

Wonderful! This was extremly special because of the recent death of Paul Newman. I was so surprised and delighted when Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid references came up. Now, I ask you, what are the odds of reading a SGA fic with those references in the very week following "Butch's" death at the age of 83? It was wonderful to relive the great scenes from the movie and enjoy a whumpilicious fic at the same time. Thanks so much for sharing your talents and for bringing back some good memories.

Read you later...

Aw...A lovely little team hurt fik. I cackle at Rodney shooting Sheppard in the foot and drool over all the angst as it bounds about. Fav bit, was the image of Rodney standing in the rain, supported by Sheppard and bleeding and shooting the gaurd at the gate. It was just a really nice visual.

Just letting you know that you and your partner in crime Koschka have been my two favorite SGA authors since the beginning, but this is my first chance to actually go back and read more of your works from before the 'Geeks and Goons' series (I hope more of that is coming soon!).

I just had to tell you that every fic you've written is hysterical, especially this one. I got to the part where Ronon got scratched up by the weasels and said aloud "Oh, great, now we have three of four team members whumped. Teyla, do us all a favor and stay out of danger!"

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I read down a few lines

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"“Teyla!” It was the only warning I had time to get out "

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and then I start laughing hysterically so my neighbors upstairs start stomping on the floor, ah but it was worth it!

Very nice story!

led here by sgastoryfinders. Awesome story. Your descriptions of the terrain they were in really helped to paint a vivid picture. And the action kept coming. I'm off to read your other stories now!

Good story! Cute and funny, and I really enjoyed the team interactions. Not classic SGA style, a lot more details and the shifting POV, but I really enjoyed it and read till the end. Great classic gen fic!

(found the link at SGA storyfinders, by the way, so you know people are still talking about it ;)