I really like this fan fiction, to tell you the truth I kinda wish it didn't end here but oh well that's you decision. Thanks for the wonderful story~

Please continue this please

PPLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS ITS SOOOOOOO GOOD DONT STOP and DONT HAVE SOME ONE ELSE WRITE IT KEEP GOING

Lol

Omg i love this story it is so funny and soras mom is so hype
it hilarious my mom would never act like that i wish she did thats the dream mo.

When i finished chapter 12 and saw the last time you updated i fell to my knees and screamed crying out "THIS CAN'T BE THE END". In other words, please continue... Please?

i watch naruto and i am a kidding [makes a serious face]

I want to cry because of how good I found this. Thank you for writing this. It made me laugh a whole bunch. ] I'm not going to ask you to update this since it seems like you've haven't dealt with this story for a while, but I wish you have success in your future writings.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOT THE END OF THE UPDATED! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE OH GOD PLEASE CONTINUE! I LUV THIS 2 MUCH!

i really enjoyed your story, and i can't help but notice you haven't updated in YEARS. so i hope a little encouragement will (hopfully) get you started again. (and yes i did just put 'hope' twice, it wasn't a typo(lol)) at first i didnt really like the story, i thought the first chapter was silly and things happened to fast and i didnt like that his mom was 'super perfect mom who buys me cars and bakes me cookies for breakfest' but after that i really loved your story and thought it was very well writen. i honestly would love to see you write more and would even maby help you with ideas if you are having writers block, again, i loved your story and i give you virtual yaoi cookie of sora and riku making out -hands cookie-

I think I had a nosebleed when I read that Riku kissed Sora's cheek, and when Riku took in Sora's scent / EEEEEEK! Now I can't stop reading! 333

3 the story! Your great at writing!

great story!

Axel! Oh no. Run before he seduces you roxas i think he's a werewolf and i'm just guessing Rin-chan i've just started reading this fic. Axel:i am going to have my UKE Roxas and no one will stop me-howls- Roxas: someone help me! He's going to rape me!

clouds soras brother people thanks for the deets about cloud. I never would have known Rin-Chan. O no sora can't have Riku no fair! Stupid fans about riku they are so mean! Nice chapter i'll keep reading Rin.