| Reviews for Amber Haze |
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Redeyes88 chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 It gave me the fuzzies! I feel warm and so excited, I feel like I was in the story. It's just so great and so well written. I love it and I would love to hear another chapter! maybe you could write smut but the warm, cute, fuzzy , adorable way of writing makes this story amazing. Anything you want to do is up to you. I hope you read this because I mean no harm. I just wish you continue with the story in a wa yet hat makes you proud. |
Clams-and-Rainbows chapter 1 . 1/9/2014 cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 That... Was Amazing...! Absolutely Wonderful! Great! And Awesome! And the ending made me smiled nonstop! X)) Love it! |
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 Very nice. I would like to see how their second date goes. ;) |
Karasuya chapter 1 . 12/1/2012 I loved the ending! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012 Loved every bit of this! Gaaah! -wishes for more- siiiiiigh such is life :) |
FullMetalCrayon chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 I love this fic! {A nice change from all the angsty RoyEd, ha} It started off a bit sad (poor Hughes, I almost cried when he died D:) but, you know, capturing a creeper and starting a relationship in one night is no small feat. Nice light, easy read! Please continue it! :D ~FMC |
Toki Mirage chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 I think that was so adorable! It had everything in it. From drunken funnies to catching a dangerous criminal to flirting. :D |
Radon65 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011 Interesting story. Pretty well written, although I'm amazed that Mustang was able to bring in a criminal and deal with all that paperwork when ten minutes earlier he had been too drunk to stand! Maybe the fight sobered him up a bit. Good description of that bar... |
solsere chapter 1 . 11/8/2009 Love it! I like it as a oneshot but if you continued it, I'd like that too. Love the characters :D |
Barranca chapter 1 . 4/26/2009 I couldn't help but think the last sentence could have been as well - He could barely wait to see how they would top/bottom it. Sorry, my mind's in the gutter :P An enjoyable story, mostly uncomplicated and upbeat. Get a date and apprehend a criminal, all in a night's work :) |
DirtyNinjaChick chapter 1 . 4/12/2009 haha, this was a great read! :D |
Ana-chan86 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009 Nice! Thanks for sharing! :3 |
fouloldron chapter 1 . 3/2/2009 Interesting fic. Well written. Plot bunny savage: #1: The next day Roy is held up finishing paper work for Hawkeye, and then waylaid by someone about a medal for his capture of a public menace. Meanwhile, at the bar someone spikes Ed's drink. When he gets there Ed is only mildly effected but shortly becomes more incapable and wanton. The only option is to get the boy out of there. #2: Ed is late for meeting Roy at the bar and a drunken Roy begins fiddling with his gloves and completing dares for drinks until Fullmetal gets there. Unfortunately a bar fight erupts at the worst possible moment and the result is that the bar burns down. Roy contains the fire but ends up with heavily charred clothing. By this point Ed arrives and so takes Mustang home that he might get a change and sober up before he has to explain everything to the local authorities and his commanding officer. Thus Roy and Ed begin to hunt for a new isolated bar, and find an ideal one with good food located next to a bath house/love hotel. The meetings continue and eventually they end up using the facilities next door. Feel free to use/ignore all comments, Ronnie. :) |
Planet Mads chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 Wah! So cute! Have the plot bunnies attacked yet? I really liked the way Ed left it at the end with the whole 'Equivalent Exchange' bit. This was really good! |