lol, really really funny. loved it. though if i were you i'd put it in humor..romance/humor even. but any way i loved it! had me really laughing out loud

very very funny! i could barely stop laughing!

LOL! Those blue eyed archeologists can be so wicked! Nice, Jack gets played at his own game! Dialogue sounds true and natural to the characters and is well written. Loved the ending! Nice capture, thanks.

Had me laughing from start to finish! roses from jack? ;)sequel! write more :)

Loved it! More?

Haha! Good job, very funny!

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Nice, nice job. I was wondering when Daniel was going to 'fess to being awake... ;)

["Danny-boy here is cooking amphibians in his sleep. Unfortunately for us, he's talking about it."]