Very Mannion-ish.

Very Mannion-ish.

Hm, don't know if it's too late for giving reviews, but whatever.

I really liked this story, especially the description of what Manion was thinking. The most important thing is the last thing that comes to mind... it's almost like Manion was trying to block the fact that McGregor had gone to the car. Nice bit of psychology there. Bravo.

Very good I really like it the way he knew what was going on but he didn't. I thought it was great so maybe If you would like to read min it is called "The Ground Above" and please review it thanx.

That was so cool! Who was it? The narrarator? Damn, that was good! Are you going to make it any longer?

My God... So raw. Very good. I really like Danny, so I hope he's ok... Wow.

Well done, logical progression of events.

Those five seconds took my breath away! Nice take on what Jack might be thinking at the time. I very much enjoyed this vignette ~ Isa

As a die hard Danny fan, I wonder how do you think he's going to get out of this one. But I like this bit. Wouldn't mind reading more. :)