we all love Zelda...even when she's a total BIIITTTCCHA!

peach is more brawler material than Zelda

from my understanding whenever theirs a Samus \Zelda pairing ganon is the enemy at first combat

Hey there! This story is really interesting! I was really hooked on it, and I read it whenever I had spare time. Sadly, I didn't had much time to it a review in every chapter, but I'll do one review for the whole story in general. :3

I love love LOVE this story so much, as much as "Lay Off My Guy!" and "Free". It's very interesting, and the plot is just really great. Full of drama here and there, along with romance. Tho, I see some mistakes here and there, but it's still really good! The long chapters, in my opinion, were really interesting, since I prefer really long chapters over short chapters.

I wasn't expecting Samus to be a singer. I was thinking that Peach would be the singer. But the way you wrote it made it seem more clear and visible. I was also surprised that Zelda was a snob in this story. But it's quite fitting. Peach has one big, interesting goal. Sure, she still has that lust of wanting to be rich and famous. But she's doing it to support the poor, unfortunate people. It's quite bold of her c:

I was also interested in Link Gaiden. You never really got the chance to write much about his past. What caused his parents to die? How was his past like? Where did he used to live? Did he used to be a delinquent? (seeing that he failed to get free meals from a expensive restaurant, along with escaping from the police, I would probably assume so) And where did he and his brother get Pikachu from?
Tho, I love how he's determined to break Zelda's snotty shell out. They had really funny moments, especially that bet that Link won. That "date" was really unexpected but funny xD

Lastly, Pichu is also really interesting, besides it being one of my favorite Pokemon. You said that she was going to play a big role in the story, right? I assumed that she was going to bring Zelda and Link closer. But she was a cutie, never mind the fact that she caused poor Zellie so much trouble xP

And there are sk many questions I have about the story...
Will Peach break up with Falcon? Will she ever be able to obtain her goal? Will Samus and Marth stay as a couple forever? Will Link be able to finally be friends with Zelda? Will Zelda bring in with Peach and her friends? Will Fox survive being in Corneia? And... Will Zelda and Peach ever be good sisters again?

Seeing this story not being updated for quite a while (along with your profile being blank :/), I can tell that you've graduated college, and busy with life. I would wish to see this story be continued one day x3 You're one of my favorite authors on this site, anyways. But if you're very busy, then I won't tamper you.

-Keki

So far so good :3
A lil dramatic for my tastes...but like I said...my tastes.

Wow, interesting story. I like it and I'll be reading!

I cannot thank you enough for making ZELDA the snobby one for once. Peach is my favorite and I hate how people always make her seem rude and weak. I still love Zelda though! And RoyxPeach is my favorite couple, and you write it so well!

I'll be reading!

WHAT HAPPEND WITH ZELDA AND LINK!

Are you dead?

I already read this story seven times. I really like it! I can't wait for you to update RK! This is one of my favorite stories ever!

I really want to see where this is going. :3 Zelda's improving... :)

Thank you! Update when you're up to it~.

What? It's over? WHY?

ooh this story so good. xd. its over. well i finihsed the unfinnished. at leas tim caught up. yeas

roy reminded me of well me! when he yelled" touch down1" xd

ooh this next chapter gonna be good. good as in bad. and bad as in drama..

prediction: roy sees peach at the restraount (idk y) he sees peach with falcon and they fiight and crying

pretty basic ah?

its funny how link scolds himself. xd