I,m relly confuset, riht now...

This is amazing.

Wow... You've said a lot with this, and I think you've hit the nail on the head!

BRAVO!

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Nora

aw.

naturally, i've felt pity for naruto before, and everything...

but never really thought of naruto being such a reverse of himself, if that makes any sense. i mean, he is such a conflicted character. (broods)

the simplicity of this fic makes it all the more sweet and powerful :)

and i feel love to sasuke, strangely. "Sasuke sees him."

that line made me melt inside. xD

anyway, i am SO adding you to my favourites,

because every story i've read of yours is AWESOME.

keep up the great work!

you really deserve more reviews

I liked that story. Exspecially the end, it was beautiful.

In the last sentance of the next top the last parograph I had to think about it really hard then after reading five other fan fics i started to laugh and came back here to tell you. I'm not to sure why i laughed but nice fic though a little confusing for the not-so-smart ones aka me.

cute

Just one word: perfect!

wow "silence covers screams" wow, that phrase was very powerful, that can be n awful feeling

nice one-shot

really really really good. the repetition actually is a really good part of it

Wow.

Wow.

And have I mentioned Wow?

wow. great analyzation of Naruto here.. I say you got him perfectly! it's just.. wow, well done.. very powerful and very real and IC.. great job!

That was really good! The ending was really deep and (to me) cute! I'm so happy to find such a cute ficcie!

Ooh, I *like* this one. Such a succinct summary of the blatant contradictions that make up his world. The parallel structure works beautifully for this fic, and the reversal at the end is very appropriate. It's all so simple, but so unnecessarily complicated at the same time, which really seems to work for Naruto.