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I liked it, it was original. It had an unspoken romance to it, and it was bittersweet at first. A perfect ending for it.

Wow that was really cute! I liked it alot...i no im gunna sound really stupid asking this but could you please tell me was a LJ challenge is? I see it everywhere and I dont no what it is!

You would end my undying curiosity and I would thank you dearly,

xxela14 :):):)

Aww, that's so cute... okay cute isn't really the word I was looking for, but it's really good. I really like how you portray the emotion - it's very realistic. And sad, but with a happy ending. _ Great job!

I must say, I really liked this. You put a lot of effort into it, and it showed. I really thought that the emotions you managed to tap into really worked, so well done )

~Master Alabe~

*sniff*...*sniff* How can you not like that? It's beautiful! And just getting the response is enough for me...but its wonderful to have it be amazingly well written as well! Just a few itsy bitsy problems with the flow of the dialouge (its the only thing I nitpick) but otherwise, AMAZING WORK! Thank you so much for the response!

Wow, that was really good.