Brilliant!

i loved it, especially the ending

xx

I am seriously cracking up right now! I think I laughed the hardest at the 'resigned to his fate as a five year old's bitch'.

Aww man, gotta' love kids!

Wow. That was fucking incredible. That was HILARIOUS. (And Hannah reminds me of someone, but I can't put my finger on who...)

LOL..Good job, funny. - Lesley.