You have a few grammar errors to work on but so far the story is really good can't wait to see at what else you can come up with goodbye.

Hope you update soon!
It's a great story!

Wait, not that I hate the idea but,
Why make Kagome younger than Rin?
That a twist.
Didn't think she would be older than kagome.
Usually rims the same age as Shippo and mate or something.
I cant wait to read the story!

Seems good I usually prefer Kagome with Itachi or Gaara

this story is pretty cool... is there still a voting for pairing? cuz if there is, i say that kagome should be with NEJI!

i gotta say its a good story but at least let someone adopt the story if someone has tell me i want to read it

Great start of a story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

oh what about shippo and kirara? Are they ok?

hey are you dead you haven't updated for years if your not i would love to be your bata

It's been 2 years! Update! Or I'll send squirrels and those ducks you hate so much in truck loads! Kirara is MINE!-steals Kirara- Oh yeah...UPDATE!

haha the squirrels are my minions so i need not fear them, lol seriously ive been nicknames squirrel since before i can remember

please update soon! like wright when you read this and if possible make it longer i wanna know what happens next and is shippo and kirara still whith her cause ya please update soon. and tell me how often you are gunna update. sorry for the pestering but i really like your story.

T-t-tha-a-at w-w-was *sniff* soKAWII! And *sniff* sad. Almost reminded me os SessXKag fics with the Neji thingie...o.O *grabs onto the front of the authors shirt* WRITE WOMAN,WRITE! YOU ,MUST WRITE MORE! *sobs still shqaking the authoress back and forth* (that sounded so wrong...) By the wall i'm a girl,but NOT a lezbo

wow this story is awesome. must write more. i have to read more of this. naruto naruto naruto! yea

I love it!