Wow there is a lot of anger and hurt but really good story overall.

nice

Good fic! I was thinking it was the two sides of Anakin at war with each other.

I like how there can be two different stories in this. Every paragraph matches each side, and yet has a different meaning for each side, besides the very last paragraph. Well... even then, Leia could have been dreaming of two different things. It could've been her dream, or she could've been seeing someone else's.

Love the twist at the end.

A great story. Very good.

That was a pretty cool dream, at first I thought that it was Darth Vader dreaming but you made it turn out different then I suspected, which is always a releif.

marvelous! I really liked this, the style and everything. It almost could be written as Darth Vader dreaming about his former self.

Great plot twist at the end! I greatly enjoyed your tale.

Phantom Jedi

Ah, that was lovely. I think my favorite part was the last paragraph. Very very good.

Hey I really enjoyed that! You've written it very well!

Yeah, the thing with Leia not forgiving her father/Vader at first has been an important theme for a while in the Expanded Universe novels after the events of "Return of the Jedi". I think you touched upon this quite well. :)

This is a beautiful, well-done story. Second person was perfect for it, and the pacing and wording was wonderful, as was the revelation at the end.