A real fav of mine. Please write more !

intense!

Wow. Thanks!

really enjoyed this.

Really loved this! It is beautifully written and a great example of the true power of words.

Scary and hot!? Thank you for sharing.

Oh yes love it!

wow, just wow. That was a very powerful short story right there. I literally gobbled it up in a few minutes. Absolutely wonderful!

That was just the perfect ending, absolutely and utterly perfect!

i loved it, it was so well written and id be so happy if you wiuld write more like this. Your use of vocabulary was great i especially loved the ending it ties it all together, too me it feels so realistic i can imagine this happening and severus snape writing and saying it iall. Another part i eapecially love is the part where he
questions her slighty by writing ''i wounder will
you betray me?''. Anyway to sum it all up i adored your one-shot and i hope you will write more. Thanks

Wow. Just wow. Brilliant. My first thought as I began to read was "Wow, this is what good writing really is." And the subtle edge of the story that you have crafted is tantalizing and inspiring. This fic is certainly unique.

That is truly one of the most beautifully written things I have ever read. Magificently done..utter perfection. Such a loss to fanfic to have you no longer! You are brilliant, talented beyond words. Thank you for your works, they are beyond treasured.

Was it poetry or prose? It was too beautiful to be prose...

Really love this fic - love the way you described each character & their individual feelings toward the other & the deliciously dark ending :) Great work!

great story beautifully written - so descriptive. thank you.