Hahah the ending...awesome. Where did you learn to do that? My secret. HAhahahahah.

And then Bikky, Lai and Carol. LOL.

By far the most amazing FAKE fanfiction I've ever read. !

that was awesome. i loved it.

"Some states may argue otherwise."

oh hell i would argue other wise...i mean look at Ryo's face when Dee's screwing him XD...that was hott...and highly amusing _

Yay! Total Hawtness! Oh, god, the mental images, I love them! This was great! And that line, "Well, I suppose it does look loaded," was absolute PURE GOLD! Fantabulous job!

loved it! _ i think i got alittle hot when i red it!

Oh my god. This is great. I love it. How did Ryo learn that?

Yikes was that sexy or what? Way cool and brilliantly written! You seemed to be going somewhere with Ryo saying

'Ryo laughed softly, patting Dee's hands with his own. "Oh, Dee, don't be jealous." He smiled at the puzzled black-haired man. "You're the only guy I've had sex with. But..." Again, he blushed.'

-seems to suggest he's talking about someone else, like practicing on or some younger try-out on another guy or something had happened before this incident, and then you make out its just a toy Ryo used...which is it...or both?

Oh...Kinky!Ryo. I think there needs to be a lot more of him. Very very sexay. *drools* XD This rocked.

muahahhahahahaa Ilove this story, really man, it rocks my socks off. . I love the loaded weapon

Haha! That was hot. I love role reversal, and the practicing thing was funny too. I feel sorry for poor Ryo. :( Oh well hahaha! I read this every day, but I'm just now reviewing it. Sorry!

hey that was good please cont. and have them go farther

hey i have a fafic that i want u to read MISCAnime CrossoversANime LandMRomance please R&R

That. Was. Delicious.

Fabulous job.

lol! I loved that! It was funny to see Ryo acting a little more aggressive for once. He's an awesome guy but he needs to let loose a little more often. Anywho, awesome ficlet.

That was totally awesome and sexy! That's scary to see Ryo act dominant like that, but totally funny. Loved it!