Love it!

that was such a badass story hahaha balthazor and anyanka both used to be evil and now arent evil great story and ironically they both became evil again later and then died in the end sadly fyi i cried on both of their deaths

I hate Anya's straightforward-ness... She will be the death of me! So, Cole's girlfriend is Phoebs or Pipes?

Yes, she really is out of the loop. It's more than likely for Phebs, or would it be for Piper?

Interesting concept! I think you had Anya down pat, as well as Cole. I pictured it very clearly in my head, just like an episode of Buffy. However, there are a few mistakes with punctuation, and at the beginning of the story you wrote "Besides" twice, close together.

do more i like it

Anya was simply AMAZING. Loved it. Made me chuckle and I loved how they knew eachother!

...yeah, anya's out of the loop alright. Loved it.

Your characterization, especially Anya, is PERFECT. I wish this was longer. :-)

I like it it's really good. I laughed out loud several times. It is well worth the read. good job.

lmfao lmfao. Too funny! I loved it :)

That was just brilliant! You could totally write a sequal to this, if you haven't already.

that's pretty funny to read!

lol

I love this! It would be so awesome if you made a sequal.