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*eyetwitch*

I believe Mr. Norman Osborn and I have an appointment with Hades.

*hefts massive chainsaw, stalks out of room*

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Sequel?

FUCK THE FUCKING FUCKER!

Awesome, found this!

(Going on favorites.)

I am glad you posted this link on the HR message board. It's great! You shouldn't be embarrassed by the writing - it's fine.

Anyway, I am writing a May / Spider-Girl story currently, so the subject really grabbed me. I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

good story , write more , i want to see what happens

good story , write more , i want to see what happens

Tissue somebody! I'm an awful reviewer, I know, so all I have to say is I have nothing to complain about-as in there's not too much gory nastiness or romance and overall there's a nice BALANCE of everything. Can I be expecting a sequel, mebbe? ~artesania

Great Story. Interesting twists. Not much to nit-pick at. Glad to see you opted not to cave in to the masses and have everyone live happily ever after, at least not yet. Hope a sequel is on the way. Hell why stop at the sequel? Go a full George Lucas and make a prequel too. Oops the pilot just turned on the "No Rambling" sign.

Iam just woundering if any new that ther was a

name is may day parker go to

borders and you well find it.

This was excellent. Any plans for a sequel? :)

AHHH CLIFFIE!

Very well written, but its to depressing. I always hated stories with sad endings.

Hey Becky, it's Phil ;) I really enjoyed the last part of this story, and Lydia Osborn is a character I'd like to see more of! So write more, dammit! ;)

Go! Go now! Write more!

*salivates with anticpation*

Excellent so far... I wonder how the rest of it's going to be (once I get the time to read it...)