This is a really good story but most of the chapters are about Julia and not really Lily and James . If anything Lily would have been hit with those curses because shes muggle born and while she only got hit by Crucio its just as bad as what Julia got hit with if not worse. She would have been in a way worse condition then Julia would have been. Sure you can make Fanfictions about OC and the mauraders but at least put it in the description that its not really about jily and more about you OC so people who want to read about Lily and James and not about a character you put in the story because you can

This is such an amazing story! Please please please will you update another chapter?! :)

HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER PRETTY PLEASE

Is poor prongsie-wongsie gonna cwy?

Update?

Are you going to finish this story? It was so good! :)

I don't like hearing Lily beat the snot out of jerks for the same reason that James does, but I still enjoy a bit of justified violence every now and again. It amuses me to picture some asshole get hit in his "stork equipment" (that's what my mom calls it!). And the fact that said moron just got his ass handed to him by a girl two years younger than him is even more awesome (high-fives Lily for the EPIC grape-squisher).

It's too bad Lily and James won't grow old together. I cry every time I read a story like this and remember that none of the marauders are left. Sad.

Great story! And people who willingly write words like 'dreadful' and 'atrocious' are not bad at spelling. I've met some bad spellers in my eleven years, and they have the vocabulary of a thimble, for lack of a better comparison. It's insane! I can't have a bloody conversation without someone saying 'what' or 'what the heck does that mean'. Oh my God, when did I start talking about myself? I'm sorry, I didn't mean to babble, but I'm not going back and delete this, letter by letter on my crappy cell phone.

Anyway, I love your story! It's not OOC at all, except for James and Lily, who are best friends, instead of Lily hating James, and James being 'an arrogant, bullying toerag' Great job!

it sucks that you havent updated in a while but the story was good so far

I love these stories so update soon

cheers

Lauren

I love it! I can't wait for more!

why have you not updated yet?

what!

i need more story! STAT! NOW! UPDATE! your...your LORD (in reality Lady, but Lord sounds better), YOUR LORD COMMANDS YOU! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

ok, update before something...drastic...must occur!

*evil laugh*

woot-ness!

M out!

I love this. This is actully a story I read and laughed and cry :)

this is SO totally funny!

its nice