Hello, I know that it has been awhile since you updated but I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story. I come back to re-read it whenever it pops into my mind. I don't know if you still have any plans to write/upload the sequel but I will be more than happy to read it if you ever do )

I still go back and read this story every so often because I love it so much! I hope you are still writing! I’m on instagram at cityhunterluv if you’re there!

I can't wait to read the sequel.

Are you still active as a writer here? I hope this serves as an incentive: THIS NEEDS A PART 2! Arug'rak is A BAD BOY holy Jezus! Getting off from killing hehe! I can see that in a future sequel that he'll come around about Sharon... definitely, I mean she already has his sons wrapt around her pinky finger. And the scene when he holds her face and examines her... with a lingering touch... tells me he sees a little more than a polished head on his trophy case, he's dark alright... no doubt about that... hehe!

Love your portrayal of the predators in this little clan of yours! And especially CUDOS to you for those exceptional action/gore parts! Fluidly and even tempo and great execution (like a movie)

So... come back to us, old and new readers!

I enjoy your world building, storyline and characters, my only critique would be that it's hard to sometimes follow the monologue exchange and from who's perspective... one moment I think I'm following the thoughts of K'tch when it turns out it's Tzuka... and so on. It's confusing.

Great read!

lol this was great for the time period you wrote it. it was realistic and enjoyable read.

I love this story

oh my god she poked it lol

I want the SEQUEEEEL I looooove ittttttt!

Awesome story, from start to finish. Thank you for letting us read it. :)

Well, hey there. It's been 10 long years since you wrote this story (or somewhere in there). I read it while you were first writing it (biggest fan here) and I decided to come back and re-read it. For some reason I remember it being so much longer, but then again I was just a little high schooler at the time. Anyway, I just thought I'd hop on here and nudge you about a sequel. You had talked about it years ago, but nothing ever came about. After all this time, I don't know if you ever still get on here, but if you do... HEY. I'm ready for that sequel now. Please? It would be he biggest comeback in history. This was one of the first fanfics I ever read and still possibly my all-time favorite. I hope some day you continue. I'll be waiting :)
~Grav

Excellent story.

All were great so far but then u drop the bomb about animal can be hunt because they don't talk. That make it sound really dumb. Animal can talk but just not in our language they communicate in their own way-.- if a mute person don't talk then they less than a being human?

All were great so far but then u drop the bomb about animal can be hunt because they don't talk. That make it sound really dumb. Animal can talk but just not in our language they communicate in there own way-.- if a mute person don't talk then they less than a being?