It is very confusing, but it's great. It's written in a way that will enable the readers to actually feel what the authors ought to deliver, which is the suspense.

Very intriguing and disturbing. Well done.

I like it.
I love angst.
So it looks like i love it too.
I LIKE IT. I LOVE IT. I WANT SOME MORE OF IT.

This is fascinating, I like all the characters involved and Naruto's captivity is pretty peaceful, I wonder how long they plan to keep him.

but what does it all mean?

This is amazing.

Heh. Foxes are amusing, ehh, Orochimaru? He careful, they dislike snakes. Make a wrong move, and they might bite you. And Naruto, the little fox, is right. Sasuke's dead, he died a long time ago. The very night Itachi slaughtered his clan. But the snake is correct, what isn't amusing? Some things that aren't meant to be laughed can be. Everything can be, really. Because, really, blue's such a pretty color. Amusing too. It can mean sadness and freedom. Calmness and coldness. And doesn't it go so well on some people? It's so funny when it's corrupted by red, in a sick way, for the ones who have been setting the stage behind the scenes. And so, grin and laugh snake, because really, blue's such an unpredictable color on some people. Watch and laugh as a simple push can be all it takes to set events in motion. A little shove, really. And it's so funny. And laugh, because you were the red, the sick purple shows what you really are. A blue soul, corrupted by red into purple, soaking in your own amusement. Silly snake. Because I mean, I mean, nothing lasts forever. Time stops for nothing, the sands endlessly burying everything, onto the windswept desert.

Huh. Very interesting fic, really love the way Naruto's mind has warped events and the subtle (and not subtle at all) ways this comes into play. Thank you for writing this!

All I have to say is... WOW. That was a surprise ending. Great oneshot.

sweet. I liked everyone's characterizations in this! Thanks for a great one-shot

this is so chiiling and sad, very very good thoguth .. Im off to read one of you're happy storries now thoguht.. I really need a happy now.

That last sentence seriously made my blood run cold. Great story, it's definetly going to my favorites.

you know I wondering what was going through your head when wrote this. It's really good. )

Good story!

ooohhh exciting! i look forward to the update! :)