Oh the feels it burns but... Well done

Cool fic, but I never do that. I don't get it because those moves ARE strong...

Anyway... I like it.

That was mean of that trainer to do that to his pokemon!

I have you know that I have never and would never do a thing like this. I just recently finished playing Emerald and my Linoone,Zago, was one of my most used Pokemon. She almost always won with her tail whip-heatbutt combo. I caught her at level 3 and she she got up to level 36, the same as the rest of my team. The only HM she learned was surf just to defeat Team Magma's camerupt. So not everyone catches Zigzagoon for HM slaves. I for one caught one because their one of the cutest Pokemon ever.

This makes me feel so bad about abusing my HM Slaves...

SAD...

Aww... Poor Zigzagoon... One I knew once did that to his Infernape in Pearl... Pretty stupid. I never use HM slaves. my heatran knows rock climb, my luxray knows strength, my empoleon knows surf and waterfall... But I'm never making my pokémon HM slaves, absolutely not after reading this story! Good work!

:( That's so sad. Dx It's making a really good point though... D: I really like zigzagoon, and I think it's cruel people use them like this-even if it is a game. xD (Or, in this case, a story.) I'm kinda glad you wrote this, but the story itself is sad. Dx

~Flareon.

Eheeeee...*Goes off to train Bibarel in Diamond*

Good job on this story, too. The poor, dumb Zigzagoon...

I never had an HM Slave; the most I teach it is two, and that's only if I absolutely have to. Like if I have only one water type and desperately need to teach one of them Surf, but it already knew Cut.

Anyways... this was very realistic. The last part was funny in a sick, twisted way. But that's okay - I'm a sick, twisted person. xD

[Deliciouscake & 200 - Duh. Did you have to remind yourself?]

For once, it won't work! Esp!(HA!)

I have never done that(Because my pokemon are too low level for me too waste a slot on a non-battler. anyway, i never got a third gen gmae, so the first time i got a zigzagoon was when my pokemon were level 60 on Diamond.

(Deliciouscake: I couldn't have put any better.)

-200

I always worried about giving my pokemon too many moves they'll never forget. The most I give them is two. Anyway...I like how the HMs make's the zigzagoon forgettful kind of ironic sence his frogetfullness was caused by moves he'll never forget (or was that the point, I'm pretty slow), Pretty good story

-A crappy reviewer

Nice fic. Poor Zigzagoon...

(Time: middle of the night. Status: really tired. Review condition: poor. Sowwy.)

HAH! You can't make me feel guilty with this! Because the only HM slave I've ever had in a real game (I used one in this one game I started but never saved in...so it doesn't count *nervous glance*), Araiguma the Zigzagoon/Linoone, was trained alongside the rest of my team, always at the same level as everybody else (except my starter, Kai the Swampert, who is kept a level ahead). I also never had her learn more than three HM moves - never had to. The fourth was Secret Power, for making Secret Bases and battling, but then I switched it out for Thunderbolt to save myself from the wrath of Wallace.

...CURSE YOU, WATER-TYPES! *shakes fist* But Arai-chan was able to hold her own for at least a few turns, and took down at least one of his annoying Water-types. Seriously, he was the only champion who gave me trouble not caused by level-inadequacies.

Anyways...dunno if much is wrong with it. I liked it - short, sweet, to-the-point, and dreadfully in-character.

Wonderful job.

-Nyaa-Neko