:'D THAT WAS AMAAAZING! I LOVED EVERY SINGLE BIT OF THIS STORY, AND THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR POSTING IT!

HAHAHAHAHA WoOOOO sASuke is BaCK YAy AND THE ShOck WitH ThE BABy!

Dear God, i broke down crying... OROCHIMARU YOU PRICK!

I WANT FLUFF!

Oh please Kami, dont let Karin be in the story!

Errrr i dont like her being fan-girly

That was beautiful. I love this story. It made my day when i read it.

Omg. Love this story!

LOve your story one of the best I had read!
Luv it! :D

That was beautiful. I'm sooooo sad its over! I cried when Lee died, he was so good to Sakura whenever Sasuke was gone... this probably will always be one of my favorite fanfictions, it was ell thought out and written, the pregnancy was a super awesome twist. Adored this story to death (:

I love the story line and all of the characters' relations and all but the scenes are too quick and too choppy- it's almost as if stating the obvious... Oh and for Author Notes, try and make it into another paragraph like this:

(A/N: blahblahblah)

Or something- it took me a few minutes to realize what it was xD Just try to extend each scene a bit longer, while also trying to like make it actually like the character and such- like Naruto's words: Believe it! Yeah you got that part but make it be more about a ramen obsessed guard or something xD And Lee- more of his poetic lovey dovey stuff xD Teehee Overall good job- I really do like the story line of this :)

hi!

this story is cute :3 BTW! i just stop from reading just to write this story :) because it reminds me the song of TaylorSwift the

...uhm! 'Love Story' haha :D

Riku and Sora... Kingdom hearts... Nice... LOVED LOVED LOVED THE STORY!

Thats was such a great story totally loved it:lol kep the good wokr going _

omg, nice story, but like near the beginning, i thought sasuke was 19 years old, and wasnt near 21...yet. and its almost been a year, right? well, whend he turn 20 or something?