Oh dear.

M, nice, but probably it isnt the right choice of story to read just before going to bed... i'll try to not have too many nightmares :-)

Ciao!

aww...heartwrenching!

Exquisite. Wow. Deep. Beautiful. You see? I can't even describe its wonder in complete sentences. You're brilliant.

Dunno what to say... Quite a dark and creepy story, but nonetheless, brilliantly written!)

Wow. That was beautifully written. A bit morbid, of course, but how else could a fic that had Harry as a dementor be? I could actually see this happening in the World of Harry Potter if, of course, JK were not the one writing it. And maybe even then, lol!

Anyway, Just wanted to let you know that it was a great read. Thanks for posting this!

wow I like it! It is creepy but good!

l like the story, but is hermione the one talking?

Woah, that was chilling and very dark and well written.

Impressive. Very impressive.

Wow. o_o This was really realistic, and chilling.

Wow . . . just wow. I was blow away by it all. Wow.

Oh that was great. Havn't read any one-shots in a while guess i should look around once again.

Ok, I'm torn between saying, "You're brilliant!" and saying, "You're sick!" This is quite a fic. I'm going to print it up for my Beta who likes Dark stories.

I do have a couple of small complaints. First, there's no mention of Ron at all. I can't believe Hermione would ignore his existance. If he's already died before this story starts, maybe she could just mention it briefly.

Second: [quote]Harry didn’t listen to his pleading.[/quote]

I think Snape would set his wand up to perform a perpetual Cruciatus and then chain himself to the wall in its path before he would plead to Harry. Just a small point.

Other than those two things, good fic!